Chapter 4.4 – Dark days, And Stormy Nights

Fraser’s Point of View

I’m so sorry Fraser… there was nothing they could do.

Her words ran through my head over and over. Pain struck my chest, as I collapsed to the floor. I sat there motionless, for which seemed like an eternity. My eyes were blood-shot, and my jeans stained with tears. I could feel my airway closing up. My breaths becoming shorter, and more forced.

Head on collision… Killed instantly…

My father… dead. He was just going to get my sister from Bridgeport. She had been locked up for the past year, for some crap. And now… and NOW, he’s DEAD! Every time I thought about it, the harder I cried. He just couldn’t be gone… not like this! It’s not FAIR!

I heard the screech of a car, and the rustle of keys. The front door swung open, bringing along a cold breeze. Kyle gasped when he saw me on the floor. He rushed to my side, and placed a hand on my shoulder.

“F-fraser?” he stuttered, shaking me slightly. I turned my head to face him, and he jumped back. “What happened?!”

I picked myself off the floor, and threw myself into Kyle. I shoved my head into his shoulder, and just cried. I didn’t say a word to him, nor did he try and pester it out of me. He just cradled me, and rubbed my back. I squeezed him tighter, and lifted my head to breath.

“My… d-d-dad.” I choked out, my face red and drenched. “H-he’s gone! Car c-c-rash.”

Kyle sighed loudly, and held onto me. “Oh… oh… Fraser. Shhhh… sweetie.” I could hear the cracking in his voice, as if trying to hold back tears himself.

We stood there for a good 2 hours. I just… I just couldn’t find it in myself to let go of him. I needed that comfort so badly. I didn’t even have the strength to call him at work. Once the news hit me, I felt like I literally died inside. My entire body just went numb.

It was around 3:10 am, when I finally did calm down. I cleared the tears from my eyes, and finally let go of Kyle. His shoulder was completely soaked, and mine… well let’s just say, I could feel a small wet spot. Even though his eyes didn’t show much, I knew he was crying.

“This was a dumb idea Kyle!” I finally managed to speak “We should have never run away! Now, my father died… and I never even got to say good-bye!”

He frowned, and his eyes filled with sorrow “Fraser, it’s not our faults that he died. He knew you loved him-“

“LOVE HIM! Not loved! There is no past tense KYLE! I will always LOVE my father.” I shouted, throwing my face into my hands. I couldn’t even cry anymore. My head was pounding, and I was so tired….

Guilt washed over him. I could see it when our glances met. “I’m sorry…” he whispered, trying to place a hand on my shoulder. I shifted away, and stormed off. I just couldn’t do this anymore… I COULDN’T!

The funeral was held a week after it happened. I couldn’t even believe I was flying back to Twinbrook. It had been a little over a year since I saw my family, and this was not the occasion I planned on returning for. Little did they know, I wasn’t staying. I just couldn’t. I mean, how could I live in a place where EVERYTHING reminded me of my father? Just NO. It was only for a few days, then Kyle and I were heading back.

“He… he did everything for me. He treated me so well. He helped me escape my darkness. WHY? WHY HIM!?” Ian screamed, throwing his face into his hands. Tears poured from his eyes, and my heart broke over and over. I thought I would feel better, if I went to this… but I felt WORSE! Seeing my family just as upset, or more… made me want to die!

What made matters worse, was that not even all of our family was here! We were still getting over the loss of our grandparents, so most of them just refused to come at all! Heather was stuck in Bridgeport, Gaven was at a base somewhere over sea’s, and Jake recently broke his leg and neck from some freak accident! Everyone was getting hurt one way or another!

So it was just Kyle, my mom, Ian, Jackie, and me.

“D-d-d-daddy!!! Please come back to me. I miss your kissies, and your-your- bedtime stories!” Jackie cried, and my mom went over and comforted her. My mother was trying to stay strong for all of us, but she couldn’t… it was just too much.

“Oh Cale…” my mom cried, letting go of her grasp on Jackie. “I’m sorry, my babies. I-I-I wish there was s-something I could do for you!”

I grabbed my mom, and pulled her into a hug. “You’ve done more than enough.”

Jackie sighed, and more tears fell from her eyes “Daddy… please don’t die. Please come back, daddy.”

I wrapped my arms around her, and sniffled.“I want him to come home too, Jackie.”

After a few days in Twinbrook, Kyle and me decided to head back. I hugged all of my family good-bye, and told them I loved them all. I wasn’t making the same mistake twice. I wanted to make sure all my good-byes were established this time.

When we got back, nothing much really changed. I was still hurting, and Kyle was still working. Crimson gave me a lot of personal time off, considering it was a very drastic time in my life right now. Kyle didn’t get so lucky considering it’s his boyfriends dad that died. Not his.

No matter what I tried though, I couldn’t get the pain to go away. I tried crying, sleeping, eating… nothing worked! I even tried replacing the hurting with physical pain!

“Are you sure you want this?”

“Not on my ARM! Not on my arm!” I screeched, nearly giving the lady a heart attack. I’m sure she’s seen people who freaked out, but… not like me.

“Now my ears… pierce them. THREE times on each ear!” I gritted, clenching my arms to my chest. I was trying so hard not to touch the tattoo on my neck. It was hurting like crazy, but I didn’t care. Instead I wanted more pain inflicted onto me!

“Alright, buddy… it’s your money.”

When that failed, I just gave up. I slipped into a depression, and stayed within my room for weeks. Kyle was barely home anymore anyways, so what would he care? When I wasn’t sleeping, I was laying there… in the dark… remembering. All my memories I had of my father, everything just flooding back to me.

They were so vivid, and realistic. Sometimes I couldn’t even separate fantasy from reality.

“Daddy! I got an ‘A’ on my science project!”

“Great job, Fraser! Come here, give daddy a hug.”

More tears. Everything I thought about ended with tears.

“Fraser, have you been yelling at your sister? What have I told you about that? She’s just a baby…”

“Dad, she’s bothering me when I’m working! I’m trying to get this concoction perfect!”

My sister. The whole reason my dad is gone in the first place. If it wasn’t for her, he would still be alive… She deserves to be yelled AT!

“What am I going to do with you Fraser?! How could you do such a thing? Haven’t I taught you better than that?”                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            “I’m so sorry daddy… I just- I- I’m sorry.”

I wish I could apologize to my father, for every time I’ve screwed up, and caused him pain. I’d do anything to have him by my side again. Oh, Dad… why you?! Why NOW?!

After long, and painful months… I decided it was time to start going back to work. I had to face reality, and accept the fact that my father was gone, and he wasn’t coming back. Kyle showed me as much compassion as he could, but even after awhile he wasn’t happy with the fact that I was still locked in our room, out of work. I love Kyle, but he can be a total jerk sometimes. For god’s sake, I lost my FATHER! I can’t help it if you hate yours…

I arrived at work the next morning right on time. Crimson, and the other workers were very shocked to see me! I hadn’t been to work in so long, they probably thought I would never come back. Once inside, I grabbed my lab gear and placed it on. I walked through the double doors, and found everyone quietly working. Before I had a chance to get to my station, something about the subject in the testing room caught me off guard.

Pregnant. The woman was pregnant! Now I’m sure this can’t be legal? It’s dangerous enough to test on just humans, but throwing a growing infant in the mix?! I just don’t know about this…

I turned to my lab partners, and cleared my throat to get there attention. “Guys? Can you please tell me why Dr. Sponge is testing on a pregnant woman? Does Crimson know about this?” I questioned, casting them both puzzled glances.

Lear snorted, and shook his head at me “Fraser, Fraser… You haven’t been around for so long, you have no idea what’s going on! Of course Crimson knows about this, it’s his Lab! DUH?!”

“So he’s just allowing pregnant women to test drugs for money? Endangering the baby?! That’s SICK!” I growled, rolling my eyes.

Sebie crossed his arms and chuckled “Fraser, that woman is not testing drugs for money. Can you just calm down, and let us explain to you what’s going on?”

“Please DO!”

“Crimson has this new running product going on -that’s been approved by the FDA- that enhances the development of the baby, and is suppose to help it along.” Lear stated, pointing to the charts on the wall.

“What, like… make it something it’s not? I’m not sure I understand what you mean?”

“It’s to lift the percentages of the birth. Like less chance of a miscarriage, or a still born. The FDA approved it, so Crimson got right into getting women to test it out. So far Crimson used it on 100 successful pregnancies. So we’ve been told…”

“So it’s 100% safe for that woman to be using it? Is what your telling me?” I stated, staring them both up an down.

(Don’t you just love the pencil, behind his ear?! :D)

“Do we have to sedate you or something, Fraser? You really need to relax. We’re suppose to just to do our jobs, and take orders from Crimson. Not worry about all that. If anything happens, you don’t want to be stuck in the middle of it. Just… calm down, alright?” Lear laughed, pointing over to the table “Go on. Jump into your pile of paperwork you’ve let stack up!”

“Funny… Real funny. But seriously wouldn’t you been concerned for the little baby, and the mother at that? I was just being careful is all.”

“We know, Fraser.” Sebie sighed “Now let’s all just get back to work. It isn’t getting done by itself.”

I went over to the table, and started working on the blood samples that were over there. I half expected the Huckleberry brothers to join me, but… they just pulled off to the side and started whispering to one another. I couldn’t really make out everything they were saying.

“Are you sure? I mean… what if he’s right?” Lear whispered, fumbling with the pencil on his ear.

“We just have to trust Crimson. I’m sure everything is fine.”

About 5 months after that day, Crimson called me into his office. His testing still proceeded on, and basically Lear, Sebbie, and I kept to ourselves. They were right… if I got myself mixed into something illegal or uncalled for, I would be in trouble as well. So we just took his word on it, and continued what we were there to do.

I inched open his door, and slid in through it quietly. He was muttering things to himself, until he felt my presence.

“Fraser.” he grumbled “Is that you?”

“Y-yes, sir.”

“Do you know what it’s like to be a failure? Over, and OVER?” he raged, barely looking over his shoulder.

I really didn’t know how to answer that. Sure I’ve done crap in my life, but to honestly call myself a failure? Not sure I can…

“Not really, sir…” I coughed, leaning myself against the wall. For some reason I felt really uneasy. So I kept my distance.

He spun around quickly, and faced me. His hair was messy, and his eyes were crazed. Something tells me this guy had a rough night… “Well lucky you.”

“But you know, Fraser? I think it’s about time for me to stop failing. You know how I’m going to do that?” he chuckled, placing a hand on my shoulder.

I gulped hard, and shook my head no.

“I think it’s about time we put that contract into use? Don’t you agree?” he laughed, pulling the folded form from his pocket. That stupid contract…

“W-what are you going to do to me?”

He handed me two small containers. I looked at him funny, and he laughed once more.

“One’s for a blood sample, and the others for… a “different” kind of sample.” he smirked, then shifted his eyes downward.


“Yea. It’s something that requires a little privacy. Don’t worry… I’m sure you remember where the bathroom is?”

My whole stomach just dropped, and my cheeks flushed red. He was not seriously asking me to just- Oh god…

“Give your samples to Lear and Sebie, then have Dr.Sponge extract blood.” he stated, as I stood there completely embarrassed. “Oh, and thanks for the samples Fraser. This means a lot to my research!”

The first thing I decided to do was the blood. It was easier, and less embarrassing than the second set of samples. In a way though, I was actually okay of what he asked of me. I was expecting to try some new drug, or inject random things into my blood stream. Giving blood, and sperm wasn’t that big of a deal. I was just curious as to what he was using it for? Maybe some kind of sampling to how it reacts to different body fluids? I wasn’t sure. All I knew was that not eating, then giving blood… NOT my brightest idea.

“Dr. Sponge? Is- Am I done yet? I feel funny…”

After the blood was drawn, and I got myself something to eat, I went into the office bathroom and “finished” the second part. What was worse than doing that at my work, was actually giving the samples to my partners.

“So uhhh… who’s taking this?”

Sebie threw his head down, and blushed red. Lear coughed a little and averted his eyes towards another part of the room. Why did they have to make it so much harder?!

About a month later, I found myself at home. It was some kind of office holiday, so I was off. Trust me though, I was happy to have it. I’ve been working 40 hour weeks, and it was nice to actually be able to just sit at home.

“I’ll be home late tonight, don’t wait up.” Kyle snapped, opening the front door. I didn’t pay him no mind. He’s been like this for awhile now, so I kind of gotten use to it.

“Mhmm, yep. Have a nice day at work, babe.” I replied, not even taking my eyes from the TV screen. 

Later on in the evening, while I was in the middle of making dinner, I got a knock at the door. It literally scared the crap out of me! I wasn’t expecting anyone to just come up to our house like that. Since our home is basically see through, I noticed right away that it was some woman at the door. I walked over to it, and she cast me a small smile.

I opened the door, and looked at her confused “Your Fraser, right?”

I nodded my head. “Um… can I come in?” I stepped back, and kept my eyes glued to her as she walked by. I was really concerned as to who she was, and why she was here?

“Is there something I can help with you ma’am?”

“Fraser, there is something I really need to explain to you. It’s about about your boss…”

Oh… this does not sound good!

Thanks for reading! A special thanks to Jed, for letting me use Lear and Sebbie!! (:

Lots of questions, running through your head? 😉 Oh and RIP Cale ):


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40 Responses to Chapter 4.4 – Dark days, And Stormy Nights

  1. marissa3 says:

    No! Cale! I was hoping he hadn’t died, oh that poor family 😦 its not right for Fraser to blame Heather for his death though!
    Those piercings and tattoos were a horrible idea, I hated seeing him do that to himself, the depression was just as bad though!
    I’m glad he got back to work but it seems like my suspicions about the lab have came true! (Although I did love seeing Lear and Sebie in there 😉 ) Is this how we’re going to get the next generation, Kyle gets pregnant?
    P.S. I haven’t seen you on my blog for a while, just letting you know I have a few new chapters 🙂 x

    • spongeb0berz says:

      Sorry about that! I was SUPER busy these past few days. I haven’t been on anyones blog for awhile ;x You shall see how the baby plays in 😉 It’s not impossible, and well I used someone’s idea they gave me xD It was the only way, really. Yea It’s tough for the whole family that Cale died. He blamed her, but then he doesn’t blame her. He was just upset when he was thinking those things. At least he didn’t keep hurting himself! Some people find a way out in that ):

  2. Awww 😦 Cale RIP we all loved you ❤ I know this is really wrong but I laughed when I read that Cale died, Not that he died but that he was Bailing out Heather, I just found it so funny that Heather got put in prison but really you saw it comming! Ohhh I wonder what Crimson's been plotting and I seriously can not wait for the baby cuteness of Fraser and Kyle!!! Great chapter, Pencil behind the ear, Classic! I always lose it when I put it there! WE love you Cale! ❤ COME BACK!!!!

  3. Carebear728 says:

    I bet she’s impregnated with Fraser’s baby!

  4. bluefudge08 says:

    Noooooo Cale!!!!! 😦 😦 😦 Cale was sooo cute! I think she is pregnant with fraser’s baby then when he tells Kyle, Kyle will be mad and thinks he cheated then they will fall in love with the baby!!! Btw… Sebbie iss so cute! ❤

  5. tessrobbs23 says:

    YAY! I love this chapter! You left me wanting more.

  6. Lilith Kawanami says:

    Well I think that Crimson took samples from both him and Fraser, then used both to impregnate the lady, so it’s like Crimson and Fraser are having a baby! Cause it’s obvious Crimson likes him, and if he likes him, then he won’t want him to be with Kyle, so Bam! Baby!
    And R.I.P. Cale! 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦

  7. sariechiny says:

    OMG! NO NOT CALE!!!!!!! Did he really die of a car accident, or was it just of old age?
    Oooh…I think I know what your plan is now…Is Crimson going to do some kind of test for fertility or something? And is that going to enable Fraser to get pregnant or something like that?
    Can’t wait for the next chapter! (:

    • spongeb0berz says:

      You’ll see what I do 😉 It’s completely normal- Well… not exactly normal, but you’ll see. Lol. He didn’t die of old age ;x

      • sariechiny says:

        Oh yea. And that woman who showed up at his door looks strangely like Kyle…
        Same hair color too…I know it couldn’t be because I remember you saying that Kyle and his brother had gay parents too…could it be his sister?!?! o.o

      • spongeb0berz says:

        Lol that’s how Kyle really got here, but in my story he has normal parents. 🙂 He has no siblings.

  8. wolfmania98 says:

    Cale… WAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH :'(. Why! 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 :(.
    Kyle was so sweet in this chap. I keep going from loving him, to hating him :s. But now, Crimson -_-

    WTH is he doing!! I might be able to understand blood samples, but SPERM! I bet hes going to sell it to a sperm bank, then some girl will get pregnent, and then Fraser will find out somehow… ok so mabye its a bit far featched… it would be cool though :D.
    And testing on that pregnant woman!!! I bet thats going to ruin the baby. I DO NOT like Crimson in this legacy…. (in a good way, I dont like his charescter)

    RIP Cale 😦

    • spongeb0berz says:

      Yea I said it from the start that Crimson was going to be VERY different in my legacy. I just wanted to use him! Lol xD Kyle you will have mixed emotions for, for right now. The solid emotion will come later 😉 Everyone is guessing, and some are close… but no one has really hit the nail on the head. Expect maybe one ;p Not saying who though!! xD

  9. Emy says:

    Caaaale!! ;A;

    And Crimson is getting creepier and creepier. Yay for Lear and Sebie though!!

    Kyleeeeeeeeeeee. Be nice!!! D: D:

  10. Jedidiah says:

    HAHAHA….. *wipes laughing tears from his eyes* Lear and Sebie as scientists! Big LOL, Funny you made them Fraser’s lab partners, because I planned the science career for them, too!!! 😀 And is that what Sebie’s nose looks when he’s a young adult? Oh my. XD
    And HAH!!!! I knew it, Crimson is some sort of wacko scientist, who’s previously failed in all of his experiments, and who got shunned by the science world and who NOW gets his big break with his latest research but who leaves a trail of misshapen, ailing newborns in display jars somewhere in a basement. All thanks to Fraser’s little donation.
    Talking about sitting on the edge, your stories are awesimm, Dr. Sponge. XD And why the hay would Fraser let a strange woman into his house? Are you nuts? Oh oh… she’ll seduce him and steals his essence… no wait, he already donated it. …oh oh, when Kyle comes home from work, he misconstrues the situation, calls Fras a cheater and then gets seduces by the woman, who steals his essence! And then…then Crimson will do some plot twisting things with Heather…Yeah, I’m so not on the money, but I love your plot lines!

    • spongeb0berz says:

      Oh Jed! Every single time you post a comment I break out into laughter! It’s like now on I await your comments, because I enjoy them SO much xD<3 I told you, you would like who I used! OH and Sebie's nose is not that bad -_- It was just the shot angle, and plus I have different custom skins than you :3 Ahhhh, you caught onto me! Dr. Sponge! 😀 I through my sim self into the lab xD So I get to be around Lear ;P I'm not crazy @_@

      LOL! Your plot line had me Laughing so hard xD I love how you try and figure out what I'm doing. It's SO awesome ;D Well she knew his name. So he probably thought it had to be something important or such. I mean it's not like she just asked to come in, with no solid proof she knew him. He's just wondering how? And why? Crimson is very cooky, that is for sure. But to be clear if Crimson IS up to something, Lear, Sebie, Spongy, and Fraser… know nothing about it.

      Oh and thank you so much! I try my best to make really neato plot lines 🙂

      • Jedidiah says:

        Oh I completely forgot to say… wuahhhh poor Cale. He will be greatly missed. More so because Fras didn’t get to say good bye. Or explain why he ran away. But maybe a good thing not to be around to see his firstborn being prodded and poked like a… okay bad choice of words… anyway… very emotional funeral scene. At least Kyle is there for him. Even if they are going through some rough patches now.

        PS: I wanna see your simself and Lear fight for employee of the month in that lab. XD

      • spongeb0berz says:

        Yea he is, and he isn’t. It’s really a bumpy relationship right now. Yea it’s ashame, that he really never said good-bye offically and that he never told his father why he left. LMAO! Yea… not the greatest choice XDXD

        Omg, Jed! How do you ALWAYS make me laugh ?! XD I would love to actually do that!! It seems so funny, yet it fits. 😉

      • Jedidiah says:

        I got it! That mysterious woman is Kyle’s older long lost sister! And she knows about Fraser BECAUSE…. she’s involved with Crimson.. and he told her that Fras has a boyfriend named Kyle… and.. and..well since Crimson works with pregnant women.. she was carrying Crim’s baby and and lost it, and then he got all coo coo. So she knows about Crim’s true agenda.
        Oh, I just read that some people think that lady is Kyle’s mom…. mhm… interesting thought, too.
        How did you get that pencil to stick behind Lear’s ear? Looks pretty smart…. argh, I meant to type ‘sharp’… but he looks smart, too.

      • spongeb0berz says:

        I downloaded it off the TSR. :3 I think just like type in pencil or something, and it should come up. It’s an accerory you add to them. Like in the glasses, earrings sections :3
        Yea it was a good theory that made it was his mom, and yours is a good theory tooooo! 😀 But no one has got it yet ;P I’m working on it now, so you shall see soon enough. Just have to get pictures! 😀

  11. jaec52609 says:

    NNNNNOOOOOOOO NOT CALE!!! i bet heather feels rlly bad and hates herself…..i was the same way when i lost my mother in a car accident, but i was 11…..ummm im kinda scared but VERY curious y crimson needed blood nd his little swimmers…..whos the woman? shes very pretty…..i wonder if thts crimsons wife nd he impregnanted his wife wit frays little swimmers…..uh oh wat about his boss? good or bad?

    • spongeb0berz says:

      Yea it’s ashame Cale died. Heather probably feels bad that her father was coming to get HER when it happened, but it really wasn’t her fault that he died. It was an accident. ): Aww I’m sorry to hear that 3: ❤ Yea everything will most likely play out in the next chapter as to what's going on 😉

    • callierose says:

      also… that woman looks a lot like Kyle. same hair colour and stuff.. oh hhmm indeed^^ mother mayhaps? ♥

      oh and the reason i just commented “NO” was out of protest. my poor Cale… T_T

      • spongeb0berz says:

        I knew it was. And I knew you would be the one who was the most upset ): Sowwy Callie<3 I just needed a good reason to keep Fraser in Ocean Breeze, and plus it made for a good story line. We shall see 😉 I'm glad you realized that, that woman looks a lot like Kyle ;P

  12. OMG!!! (Yeah I’m commenting again ;D) I think I know what’s going on, well sort of. I think that that woman at the front door, who just happens to look like Kyle, is his mom and she know’s so much about crimson because he’s like a realative of some kind and that he’s really trying to make up for something, something to do with the potion that Fraser made. Maybe, just maybe it could be more than just a tiny bomb that exploded a science block, I think it’s WAY more than that, After all wasn’t the reason Crimson wanted Fraser in the first place because of that tiny bomb…. But that’s just a thought really, a crazy little thought from the back of my mind 🙂

  13. Esther says:

    Oh the mysteries…. Why are you doing this to me?! Argh… MUST. KNOW. ALL.

    Other than the fact that I really don’t what the hell is going on anymore, great chapter 😉 Bahahah.

    • spongeb0berz says:

      Ahaha, >:D Then my job is complete for this chapter. Everyone is basically left in the dark! Thanks though 😉 Glad you still liked it! I got a big chapter coming out (more than my usual 30-35 more like… 55 pictures)

  14. Jonas Legacy says:

    I had a nasty thought about the end 😛 The girl has the same color as Kyle… naybe he got a sex change wierd but lol I’m LOST! Great Chapter 😀

  15. bunnypunk says:

    Not Cale! *dies* It just broke my heart when Jackie said that. *cries*

    Great chapter!

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