Chapter 5.3 – Inner-Battle

Makenzie’s Point of View

I took a step back. My breaths low and short, my heart racing faster and faster. The only thing I could do was stare at him. Did he just say he loved me?! I was trying to get past everything he just told me, now he LOVES me?!

“Please say something.” he breathed into the crisp air. The wind blew chillingly at us, but neither moved. I didn’t know how we could! I was completely baffled and blown away, and he was waiting for my answer.

Part of me wanted to run into his arms, and squeeze him tight. The other half wanted to scream and yell, wondering how he could ever think I would love him!

He nudged the topic again “Makenzie… I know it’s tough, but I need to know how you feel. I really am so sorry.”

I swallowed. My mouth was so dry, and scratchy. The thought of him and me kept running around inside my head. My stomach twisted in pain, and I clenched it.

“I-I… I don’t know!” I blurted out, my head growing a headache as I spoke.

I looked at the ground for another second, then darted away. I just couldn’t do this right now! This was too hard for me to decide right then and there. This isn’t choosing out which type of candy I wanted from the store, this was choosing if I loved someone or not! And this someone didn’t make it easy to love him.

When Jeremy saw me book it, he came running right up behind. GOD! He just doesn’t quit!

I shoved open the gate, then stopped in my tracks when I heard him call out my name again.

“Please Micki!” he begged “I’m sorry I asked you to make this decision now, I just need to know.”

I balled my fist at my side, and narrowed my eyes. This was too hard of a choice to choose NOW! He was just making me so frustrated!

“Jeremy, I swear to god you won’t like my answer if you make me choose right now.” I spat out, not even turning to look back at him.

I could feel him staring at my back, and the sense of pain that he was feeling. It was either he’s sad for right now and I have time to think, or I was just going to drop him for good. I don’t need a man who’s pushing me into something. I need someone who will be willing to wait for me.

I came home around a half hour later, and drug myself into the living room. Being as that I was tired of being alone for once in my life, I threw myself down next to my sister. Of course being that she easily picks up on EVERYTHING, she of course asked me what was wrong. Reluctant to her persistence, I sighed and started explaining.

“I just don’t know what to do.” I sighed, my eyes glued to the wall. I didn’t feel like looking at her. I felt ashamed of myself for actually thinking about him like this.

“Here’s an idea…” she said rather matter-of-factly “How about your forget about this guy, and find someone who is actually worthy of you? Your a great girl Mick, why would you want to settle for less, when you can have so much more?”

Great! So I sort of seek advice from my sister, and she slaps me in the face with it.

“Why would say that about him!? He’s not less! He just made a mistake!” I snapped back, her face left in shock.

“Mistake!? Forgetting your homework is a mistake, raping someone is a crime! I can’t believe you actually think he loves you. Micki he has issues! Please just listen to me.” she pleaded, her eyes filled with worry.

I lowered my head, and let a tear escape my eye. In my head I knew everything she was saying was true. Even if he did love me, I would always be carrying that burden of not knowing if he would hurt me again. But my heart screamed no! It wanted to let him in and forgive him. To hold him close, and tell him that I loved him too. I didn’t know WHY I felt this need to defend him, but I just… did.

“You don’t know him like I do!” I sniffled, another tear sliding down my cheek.


I stood up from the couch, and headed straight for my room. Not even giving her a second glance. She called out for me a few more times, but I just ignored her. I didn’t care what she thought. I knew what I wanted.

I collapsed onto my bed, and wrapped my blanket around myself. I laid there with my eyes closed, but I didn’t sleep. My mind was too busy trying to figure things out to sleep. Why do things have to be so difficult?

Fraser’s Point of View

It had been weeks. Kaylee was exceeding in her job with Jed, and Lia was getting offers made on her beautiful artwork all the time. I was completely satisfied with the twins, and how they’ve been. The only one that’s been really bothering me is Makenzie. I hate it that she is always stuck in her room crying or out all hours of the day by herself. It scares me to think that she could be undergoing depression, and thinking bad thoughts. She’s my baby girl, and seeing her like this breaks my heart.

“Scott I just can’t take it anymore! Every time I look at Micki, I get upset! That tells you something right there.” I sighed, my eyes filled with regret “Do you think it’s something I did? I always gave her everything she could ever need.”

Scott laid his hand on my shoulder and looked me in the eyes “Don’t blame yourself for Micki acting this way, Fraser! She’s just struggling right now. I’m sure she’ll get past this phase soon enough.”

“It doesn’t feel like a phase. I just feel that she’ll never be happy. She hasn’t had it easy, and she’s still so young…”

Scott wrapped his arms around me, and I rested my head on his shoulder “It’s going to be okay Fraser. We’ll get her through this. We’ll all get through this.”

I really hoped he was right.

Makenzie’s Point of View

No matter how hard I tried to get Jeremy out of my head, I couldn’t. Those 3 words ran through my head over and over. Why could 3 simple little words, turn my whole life around?

I stepped out the front door, after being home for the 6th day in a row. My parents gave up trying to force me to go to school, and just sighed every time they passed by me and saw me curled up on the couch. I was about to go get the mail, when I nearly tread over a dozen roses.

I picked them up, and smiled when I saw that my name was written in a note on the side. I knew they were from Jeremy, and my heart swelled with pride every time I thought about him. How could I not forgive him? He’s trying so hard to win my affection, yet all I’m doing is shoving it back in his face. He deserves better than that, right?

I went inside the house, took a quick shower, and got dressed. I noticed that I forgot to put my phone on, so I picked it up and let it power up. When it finally flashed into life, I noticed I had at least 3 messages all from Jeremy.

I dialed my voice mail, then placed the phone to my ear.

“Hey Micki, it’s Jeremy again. I just wanted to see if you were alright, and to tell you that I’ll wait as long as it takes for you. You mean everything to me, and that’s never going to change. Well… see ya.”

Things like this made it so much easier to lean towards him, but at the same time… he did call me drunk once this week. How can I choose if he will never quit!? He’s driving me insane! I don’t know what to do anymore. One moment I’m all for him, then the next I’m confused again. Sigh.

About a month later it was my sisters birthday party. They didn’t throw anything big, but there was still too many people for my taste. I watched from the couch as people started to arrive, when all of a sudden there was this big giggle fest from Rose and Kaylee was completely embarrassed.

“Oh my god… Rose! I told you to stop messing with him! Heh… Hi, uh, Jed.” Kaylee waved slightly to her boss, her eyes glued to the floor.

“What?! I told you I could get him shirtless!” she laughed harder, her tongue hanging halfway out of her mouth.

(Oh yea, I so went there ๐Ÿ˜‰ Nice 6-pack, Jed!)

“Hey guys! I’m here for the… um, why aren’t you guys in bathing suits?” Jed questioned his smile quickly falling.

I rolled my eyes “Cause’ this isn’t a pool party. You’ve been duped, dude.”

He cleared his throat, and adverted his eyes away from us.

“Um, uh, … Can- Can I borrow a T-shirt?” He stuttered his cheeks burning bright.

My dad walked by and glared at Rose. He gestured for Jed to follow him, and the only thing I could do was laugh. It felt so good to laugh.

Since more and more people were showing up, I decided to high-tail it outside. Being left alone to my thoughts felt like the only way I could actually feel better. I learned that talking about my problems only gets more even more angry, so being alone it is.

Yea but when you have a problem solving boss like Kaylee has, there’s no time for being alone I guess.

“Mind if I join you?”

I scooted off the lawn chair, and made my way up to face him.

“Oh I was just going inside, you can have my chair if you like.” I gestured, offering the empty spot to him.

“Nah, I thought I’d rather talk to you.” he smiled.

God, he reminds me of my dad and papa. Never leaves me alone, always want to talk…

I sighed at him “Alright, I can see I’m not getting out of this am I?”

He smirked “I wouldn’t bet on it. So what’s eating you kid? You know you can tell me.”

I rolled my eyes and cast him a small smile “Well besides those shorts? Just… stuff”

“Well, well… look who knows how to crack a joke.” he laughed, shaking his head at me. “But really Micki, what’s wrong? Don’t you want to enjoy the party with your sisters?”

“I’m not so great with large crowds. Heck, I’ve never been good with people.” I chuckled to myself.

“Aw come, I heard that “someone” had some big news to announce.” he winked.

“Big news? What big news?”

“COME ON YOU TWO! We are about to sing happy birthday.” Papa shouted from the sliding glass door.

“Come on Mick, time to sing!”

What was he talking about? What kind of news does someone have?

My parents brought the cakes to the counter, and we all sang happy birthday to my sisters. The entire time though, I couldn’t wrap my head around the idea of someone have big news, that I didn’t hear about! It was really irking me!

“Happy Birthday!”

New trait is friendly

New trait is family-oriented

After we sang I waited patiently in my room, wondering when someone was going to say this “big news”. It was then, that my sister came in with a giant smile on her face.

“Oh my god! Makenzie your not going to believe what Jed just told Kaylee!” she gleamed, her smile spread ear to ear.

“What?” I sighed “Just tell me! I’ve been waiting forever.”

“Jed offered Kaylee a job at the new fashion industry in Apploosa plains! There starting a sister company, and Jed is making Kaylee a head designer!” she nearly shouted.

“Wow.” I said nearly emotionless “That’s great for Kaylee.”

“Great for- NO! It’s great for us too! Micki we’re moving there with her! Dad said that he doesn’t want what happened to him, to happen to us. What ever we decide to do, he’s going to support in anyway he can. Plus Jed knows this guy at an art gallery down there, and he’s looking for new pieces!”

“WAIT. We have to… move?” I swallowed a lump in my throat, my stomach twirling in knots.

“Aren’t you excited?!”

Excited?! How could I be excited for this?! I finally came to the decision I’ve been trying to decide for nearly 4 months, and then we’re just dropping everything and leaving?! Screw that stupid job!

“Why would I be?!” I cried out, tears streaming down my face “You can’t make me leave him!! Not after all this!”

“Micki… if your talking about Jeremy. You don’t need him! You can do so much better sweet heart.” she frowned, trying to place her hand on my shoulder.

I jolted away and screamed, “Stop it! All of you just STOP! I don’t need anyone telling me what I should and shouldn’t do. This is MY life!! Screw that stupid job, I’m not going anywhere without him!”

I took off out the front door, and dashed down the street. How dare they think they can separate us?! I’m not going to let them!!

I slipped my phone out of my pocket, my hand shaking in fear “Hello?” Came a voice from the other line, and my heart lifted.

“Jer-Jeremy? I-I… I want you to meet me somewhere.”

“Why? What happened!? Are you okay?” he demanded, his voice growing worried.

“I just really need to get something off my back.”

Bonus Stuffz:

This is Lear and Jackie’s new kids. You know? The ones that were born awhile ago, but I totally forgot to take pictures of ._. /fail. There twins and their names are Natosha and.. wait for itttt…. BUBBA! /double fail Why game? WHHHY? What kind of name is Bubba? XD

Here’s teen Jackson! ๐Ÿ™‚ I love him<3

Lol I just thought this was funny! xD So this is what Jed does in his free time! ๐Ÿ˜›

Thanks for reading! Sorry this chapter was kind of crappy ๐Ÿ˜ฆ I’m still getting over my sickness, but I really wanted to get this chapter out of the way. If you couldn’t tell Micki is REALLY struggling with something mentally. Jed already foiled my plans, if you saw his comment. (That’s why you get to be shirtless! xP) Plus I couldn’t wait to get out of Ocean Breeze. Dumb patch screwed it up. Don’t worry AP is totally glitch free ๐Ÿ™‚ I’m excited to use pets in this generation!


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"My fake plants died because I did not pretend to water them." - Mitch Hedberg
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190 Responses to Chapter 5.3 – Inner-Battle

    • Spongey says:

      Lol ๐Ÿ™‚ Your always my first to read.

      • Yep, and I’ll be that way for at least a few months.

        Bad news, I dropped from school today.

        At this point in my life, your legacies are the only things that make me smile.

      • Spongey says:

        Aw Tonks! D: That’s not good. School is so important ๐Ÿ˜ฆ I’m glad I can help, but… I hope you reconsider? ๐Ÿ˜ฆ

      • I feel bad that I dropped, but shocker, my parents made me drop out.

        I might get a therapist to help me through this, but I need a bad therapist, bad therapists are the only ones who get you on the road of healing.

        School is very important, but if I come back I will need to start my life over, which is going to be hard, because I don’t want to be known as the depressed girl who dumped a douche in school.

      • Spongey says:

        :/ I know things can be really tough. I always feel so strongly about people dropping out of school because my one friend did it, and she has such a hard time finding work and making a living for herself and her baby (soon to be second baby ._.) It just makes me sad ๐Ÿ˜ฆ Just think it over. โค

      • I’ll try thinking it over. But the guy’s really done it this time, and all this time I’ve been clueless that he’s using me to make girls feel bad for him. ๐Ÿ˜•

      • Spongey says:

        ๐Ÿ˜ฆ Aw what a Jerk!

      • Yep… Worst jerk EV-AR!

  1. plumbobby220 says:

    I loved the chapter, it wasn’t crappy that’s just your sickness talking, and do you have pets now?

  2. โค This chapter.

    Is it just me or is Jeremy much sexier in this chapter?

  3. plumbobby220 says:

    Oh and I forgot to ask where do you get the scars and bruises that appear in this legacy? (I already copied you for the tears, sorry)

  4. tessrobbs23 says:

    Can’t wait till next chapter…… Ahhhhhhhhhh

  5. Sorry for posting that sponge, just needed to let her/him know. ๐Ÿ™‚

  6. sariechiny says:

    AHAHAHAHA BUBBA?!?!?! really? woww XDXD
    *regains composure* Anywayys…great chapter!(: It sucks how Micki didn’t react the way I wanted her to, but, i suppose when you’re in her situation, anything can happen xP
    The twins are both so pretty!<3 I hope moving doesn't ruin her relationship with Jeremy…I think you've got something up your sleeve again for next chapter…

    • Spongey says:

      Who meh? Would I ever have something going on? xP โค I know!! Not one of those kids has failed me! Lear and my simself rock at making kids… wait, that came out wrong.

      Lol I KNOW! BUBBA! xD So funny. Aw thanks. I wasn't so sure of myself, but it seems you guys liked it ^_^ Then I'm happy.

  7. Jedidiah says:

    THAT’S why I get to be shirtless???? Foiling of plans is a reason why good guys in bad movies always end up being mauled by something terrible, but this??? *blows raspberries* XD
    I just had a feeling that the Mickster might go there. Because Jeremy was/is her best friend. But of course I support Kay’s opinion. Hopefully Fras and/or Scott will figure it out and rush to rescue her out of that.

    XD Bubba! That’s so… Sebie…you know, if Sebie had a choice in naming his sons. Good for us, they were already named. Bubba… hahaha… Hey, Jackson looks good. You know, your sims look better with hair out of their face… mine look like they have ginormous foreheads!!!

    I agree, your sickness was talking. This chapter ties in perfectly to the last one. Whaz your problem, woman? LOL -Jed

    • Spongey says:

      You wanted it to be worse? I can so do worse Jed! xP Don’t tempt me!! ;D <3<3 Yea your right, and she did. I still didn't say what just in case people are clueless of it. Your too good at guessing!! ARG! xP<3 But I love a good challenge.

      I know right! You would think that Sebie would name his son that, not Lear! xD So awesome though. I could have changed it, but it was too hilarious so I kept it XD I know! I thought Jackson turned out pretty swell! He doesn't really look like either of them though O_o He's his own creation! Where as Rose takes after her daddy. Which I adore <3<3

      Really? Why am I the only one who thought it was dumb… besides the parts messing with you? ๐Ÿ˜‰ Lol! I'm neurotic I can't help it!! XD

      • Jedidiah says:

        I don’t need to tempt you, you will come up with something that’ll make ‘wear rouge’ all week. :p
        Well, Jackson has his parents’ eyes, I guess. Imagine you’re this cool person having to deal with a little brother called Bubba. XD
        So my simself is trying to be friends with Mikki, again huh. That’s the second time, he’s trying to get her to open up (no pun intended). What are you scheming?

      • Spongey says:

        No Scheme. Your just nice ^_^<3 He can tell she has something bothering her, and just wants to see her smile. Kaylee and your simself are really close, so he's always there. Since the first time he saw her, and this time it's been a huge gap. Guess you could say he's a friend of the family now ๐Ÿ™‚
        Your right… you never tempt me! I do it anyways xP<3 Lol it took me a second to catch on to what “wear rouge” meant xD I can be really slow to process at times XD

        Well Yea, he does. But he sure doesn't look like Lear… and he doesn't look like my simself either xD LMAO XD "So is that your baby brother? What's his name, he's adorable!"

        "*cough* Bubba….


  8. Laura says:

    FIRST COMENT!!!!!!!
    I love your legacy, and your such an amazing writer!!!!!!

  9. jaec52609 says:

    my poor micki…..ha u didnt lie when u said ud find a way 2 put jed in there shirtless lol….kaylee is movin on up….i figured jed wouldve fell in love wit our beautiful kay kay since he works nd hangs out wit her (jed knows he wants 2 lol)…..i think micki thinks shes in love jeremy since once again the thought of movin forced herself 2 make a decision if she loved him or not….it doesnt rlly take 4 mnths 2 figure out if u love someone…….i hope nothin bad happens nxt chpt *stalks page 4 more* lol
    hope u feel better soon

    • Spongey says:

      Thanks so much ๐Ÿ™‚ Yea your so right when you say that. It really doesn’t take that long to figure it out. It’s either you them or you don’t. But she’s fighting it so hard. She doesn’t want to love him, but she doesn’t see the reason why not too? Thought her family gives her the RIGHT advice she still goes against it. She’s defending him for no reason, instead of just letting it go. I feel bad for her, because she thinks this is the only way someone will ever love her. She’s so insecure about herself.

      I TOLD YOU! ;D I have my ways of doing things! ๐Ÿ˜€

      Thanks, I hope so too.

  10. Hey, I was wondering where you had gotten the tears. I had downloaded one from lemonleaf, but it was only for young adult women.

    • Spongey says:

      Yea surez ๐Ÿ˜€

      There at the bottom ๐Ÿ™‚

      • About the tears….
        When I had my game the tears were only for Teen-Elder.

        Was there something else I didn’t download?

        I’m thinking about installing the game again, because I’m just so desperate for sims…. Maybe it’s time for me to dust off TS2 and order all the expansion packs again.

        But… Grrr…. If I did, I’d be playing a family of Tiaras or whatever that sim’s name was… ๐Ÿ˜•

      • Spongey says:

        Blech! I’m sorry, I could never play the sims 2 and enjoy it, after I’ve played the sims 3 for so long. It’s 100 times better!!! โค The tears weren't for kids. Just teen-elder. I haven't found kid tears yet. I wish someone would make them.

      • Tonks says:

        A lot of people who like the realistic side of the sims like TS3, except of course they can accept the vampires. ๐Ÿ™‚

        People who ABSOLUTELY FRICKIN’ LOVE the whacky creations in the sims go on running to TS2. I love the whacky creations, ’cause I like testing Nervous Subject. ๐Ÿ˜›

      • Spongey says:

        Ha ha yea, and pregnant males was something you could actually DO. I have to say, I do miss alieans!

      • Tonks says:

        Oh and did you know the Curious brothers from TS2 lived in Twinbrook in Ambitions? Ah, Pascal as a toddler… <3.

        I swear, the Curious brothers had some really weird alien kids. O_O

      • Spongey says:

        Oh my gosh, really? I didn’t even notice! XD I’m slow to catch onto things anyways, so I blame my brain.

      • Tonks says:

        Speaking of the Curious brothers Pascal went into labor and I named the baby ET. XD

      • Spongey says:

        Ha ha that’s funny. I had one and I named it something from star wars before XD I think it was Yoda.

      • Spongey says:

        I’m almost done getting pictures for the new chapter. I couldn’t resist. I’m was bored, and wanted to make a new chapter XD

      • Tonks says:

        As soon as the baby grows into a child, I’m sending him off to Circe and Loki’s house.

        New chapter? YAAAY! ๐Ÿ˜€

      • Spongey says:

        Ha ha xD I remember in the sims 2 that the teen stage was the most boring stage, right? But in sims 3 it’s the most exciting. Yup you got it ๐Ÿ˜€ I got bored so I just decided to just get the pictures for it. Lol xD I really am enjoying this generation for some reason. I don’t know why.

      • Tonks says:

        Actually the teen stage in TS2 really excited me because teens got dun dun dun…. ACNE! :O

        XD TS3’s teen stage was really exciting, but I’m so glad I have TS2 because it means no more updates! ๐Ÿ˜€

      • Spongey says:

        Ha ha that’s true. You won’t have to worry about EA updating it xD Really? ;o I don’t remember the acne! … It’s been so long since I played x_x

      • Spongey says:

        Hey Tonks? Is it just me or is this REALLY dangerous XD

        It’s like she wants to gallop with the horse.
        (This is my for-fun family)

        Oh. And this is just gross….

      • Tonks says:

        1. Your for-fun family baby is adorable from her side. XD I think that’s a bit dangerous.

        Maybe the acne was in an EP you didn’t have.

      • Spongey says:

        Maybe your right. I didn’t have fun time or apartment life. So maybe one of those two?

        Ha ha, she’s a real sweetie ๐Ÿ™‚ Her name is Ralli. And she’s so pretty as an adult ^_^

      • Tonks says:

        Sorry for changing topic but I want to know:

        Are you going to write the chapter today/tonight? I really want to play TS2 right now but I’m eager to see if you’ll write up a chapter.

        TS2 + Newsea = HEAVEN!

      • Spongey says:

        No I’m way too tired to write a chapter right now. It’s 3 am xD I haven’t even gotten the last 3 pictures cause I need to finish redecorating the house. ._. It’s about a quater done, but I’ll do the rest tomorrow. G’night. ๐Ÿ™‚

        I love newsea. All my peggy hairs for tot-child got EATEN! /fail I hate you EA, I seriously do.

      • Tonks says:

        G’night. ๐Ÿ™‚

        I’m so glad I have Newsea back, even if it’s just the Luna hairs, and even though it took me awhile to get the Luna hairs on sims. :’D

      • Spongey says:

        Yea New sea is a life saver. It’s the only hairs that survived for kids. I know I’m complaining like a little baby, but I actually have back ups for them XD I just need to put them back in lmao.

      • Tonks says:

        I had to uninstall my game ’cause it crashed.

        The game restarted and when Don Lothario and Cassandra got married he didn’t run away. That’s not a good thing! He’s meant for NINA! NOT STUPID UGLY CASSANDRA! D:

        I’m gonna re-install Newsea anyways. *cheers*

      • Spongey says:

        xD ha ha, that’s funny. I’m going to upload my photos for the new chapter, and work on it tonight ๐Ÿ™‚

      • Tonks says:

        *o* NEW CHAPTER?!? YAAAAYY!

        Meanwhile, I’m having the patience to build a town in tS2. .-. AND I WANT THE TOWN TO BE OVER-POPULATED! D:

        Hey, I have a question about the Tombstone of L and D in TS2 that you may not be able to answer:
        There was an option called NPC Killer, and I was wondering… What the hell does it do?

      • Spongey says:

        Yup! ^_^ I’m going to start to write it out now, I hope it’s good! ๐Ÿ™‚ Some may like the outcome, while others may not. Ha ha I love over-populated towns that are sims that I made. Not face ones or premades that are fugly.

        Oh god. I haven’t used that in SO long. Honestly, just try it XD Go into a seperate save, and test it out to see what it does XD

      • Tonks says:


      • Spongey says:

        Sweeeeeet!! ๐Ÿ˜€

      • Tonks says:

        Double woot, in my TS2 game Vidcund had an alien baby named ET and Pascal had a baby named Icky.

        Icky has two twin siblings, their names are Baby and Testing Subject, because is used the Tombstone of L and D to make him alien pregs. :DDD

      • Spongey says:

        I love that! XD Also you can use boolprop to make the pregnancy like 3 sim hours long XD It’s so epic!

      • Tonks says:

        The only non-fugly that is in Pleasantview is Brandi and of course, Kaylynn Langerak.


      • Spongey says:

        Yea I know. All the others are so UGLY. Why does EA think people acutally WANT ugly sims? Twinbrook is like… fugly universe.

        ๐Ÿ˜€ Yup! I just need to stop getting distracted by things on the web XD Everytime I think of something I need to check, I go away from starting the chapter. Must. Start. Chaaapter…. XD

      • Tonks says:

        Oh I did speed up the pregnancy. ๐Ÿ˜€

        Oh and I think all the NPC Killer option does is kill all the maids, check-out people, and rude random people and replace them with kinder ones.

      • Spongey says:

        Sweet >:D KEEL THEM! Lol. I know! It’s the most awesome thing to speed it up XD โค

      • Tonks says:

        ZOMG liek, the fugliest sim I’ve ever seen has to be Loki Beaker from Unusualsoimustdietown.


        Except for Kaylynn, she does her job *and* pleases Daniel Pleasant.

        I keep getting this weird dude named “George” for one of the cashiers in all of my towns.

        Speeding pregnancy = Something that TS3 needed.

      • Spongey says:

        I know! I wish that sims 3 had that cheat too… there are some good ones that sims just TOOK out! Shame on them! ._. Ha ha, funiture loving sims XD So epic.

      • Tonks says:


        JUST KIDDING! Take your time, but no seriously, don’t mind me, I’m just stalking this place every day and commenting to pretty much everything. ^-^

      • Spongey says:

        Ha ha tonks, I adore your comments ๐Ÿ™‚ I check my blog almost every hour cause of you โค ๐Ÿ™‚ I love talking with you ^_^ โค

        Ha ha I get distracted easily. It's my nature XD But I did start writing it, so theres hope afterall with me!! ;D<3

      • Tonks says:

        Daw, well I’d say that I check this every hour for your comments but honestly, it’s mainly because I have nothing to do every day of my life. D:

        Hope after all! Yay! Yeah, I get distracted to, I haven’t wrote much of Blarghishshohargh It no Longer Has A Name yet, and plus TS2 is controlling me. *Double woot, sims control my life. .-.*

      • Spongey says:

        Lol sims can be very addicting. It’s my all time favorite game, and I’ve spent over 100 dollars on it XD.

        ๐Ÿ˜€ Yup! 3 pictures in….. /fail It’s funny though because I’m going onto the 4th picture, and I already have FOUR hundred words. o.o I’m typing a lot xD

        Lol Blarghishshohargh. XD Funny name for it.

      • Tonks says:

        Wow, I’ve only spent about 60 dollars on sim games so far! Probably because I find them for some really cheap prices, like Seasons was only 15 dollars, not counting the shipping cost.
        I NEED to find cheap prices for Nightlife.

        400 words already? With only four pictures? I ish impressed.

        Blarghishshohargh was the shortest name I could think of.

      • Spongey says:

        Well I just buy them for full price cause I get impaient to wait for price drops. I usually pre-order the games, so they are always going to be full. For sims 2 I would buy EP and SP for like 10-15 dollars. No more than that!

        Yea I know! I’m impressed with myself XD I guess I’m just going to be wordy with this chapter. It’s kind of longer than my normal chapters, and it’s gonna have more words.

        5 pictures and I have 641 words! XD Wowzee..

      • Tonks says:

        I somehow got the patience to wait for every expansion pack to drop price, and by the time that happened, Neon was a *bam* toddler! Since my lifespan for sims was set on epic.

        Words are more important than pictures.

        ….Which is one of the reasons why Blarghishshohargh has no moar pictures. ๐Ÿ˜›

      • Spongey says:

        Your really discreptive with yours so I enjoy reading it, even though there aren’t pictures! ๐Ÿ™‚ I think that the pictures and words play a 50-50 in sims stories. People like to see what is actually going on. Not saying that having no pictures makes it a bad story, just saying that pictures are fun ๐Ÿ™‚

      • Tonks says:

        Blarghishshohargh would be much more interesting if it had pictures, but I am NEVAR EVAR playing TS3 again. *sobs*

        *TIMEFORRANDOMSPAMMYQUESTIONBECAUSEI’MBOOORED* What ish your favourite (zomg, I know it’s favorite) movie? And whai, is it your favorite movie?

        Mah favorite movie would have to be Bridesmaids, ’cause it’s pretty damn funny. :DD

      • Spongey says:

        I LOVE questions like this ๐Ÿ˜€

        Well, my favorite movie would have to beeeeee….. Dark Knight. Cause it’s freaking AWESOME, and the only batman movie I would ever watch until I was blue in the face. Joker is my favorite villian of all time, so it just takes the cake.

        My turn!! What’s your favorite color? ๐Ÿ˜€

      • Tonks says:

        Hm… My favorite color is… Hur durrrrr…. Er… Weeeellllll, the color of Nymphadora Tonks was purple… And I really love purple… So… Purple is mah favorite color.

        What’s your favorite TS3 expansion pack?
        Mine would have to be Generations, ’cause it has SO MUCH STUFF! ๐Ÿ˜€

      • Spongey says:

        Oh I forgot my favorite color XD Mine is red, it’s always been red since I was a little kid. ๐Ÿ™‚ My mom’s favorite color is purple too ๐Ÿ˜€

        Mine has to be… uhhh… Late night, cause of the vampires. :3

        What’s your favorite TV show? Mine is CSI: Miami then Psych

      • Tonks says:

        ZOMG PSHYCH!
        BUT, my favorite show has to be Criminal Minds, ’cause it reminds me not to take van candy from strangers, no matter how many Mars Bars they have. ๐Ÿ˜ฆ

        What is your favorite candy bar? Mine is Mars Bars. ๐Ÿ˜€

      • Spongey says:

        I know isn’t shawn SO hawt?! o.o *drools* I wanna snuggle him xD<3

        My dad loves Crimminal minds! SO does my friend. She's in love with it.

        My favorite candy bar? Well… I don't really like chocolate, but I do like 3 muskteers and Hersey bars. I've never heard of a Mars Bar. lol

        What's your favorite cartoon character? Mine's spongebob!!! (Lol no kidding right? XD)

      • Tonks says:

        Hm… Patrick Star! ๐Ÿ˜€ Is Spongebob Squarepants still around? Like, his show? I haven’t seen that show in two years, I feel bad about that. D:

        What is your favorite book series? Mine would have to be Harry Potter, ’cause Tonks is in there… But she dies! Oh whai Tonks? D:

      • Spongey says:

        ๐Ÿ˜€ Our characters are in the same show! Whooopeeee! ;D YUP! Still around, and I saw the new seasons preimere ^_^ I’m such a little kid. I’ve been watching spongebob for like… 11 years. Good god! Has it been that long!? O_O

        Book series? Wow, I honestly don’t know. I haven’t read a book in so long XD My favorite book is holes though.

        What’s your favorite food? Mine’s french fries ๐Ÿ˜€ OR chinese food! Yummm!

      • Tonks says:

        My favorite food would have to be…. Angel Blossom Soup, some sort of soup at a Chinese restaurant called Chang’s.

        What is your favorite band, or, solo artist? Mine would have to be Paramore.

      • Spongey says:

        I never tried that before ๐Ÿ™‚ I’ve tried Won ton soup though. Yum<3

        My favorite band is The Ready Set. ๐Ÿ˜€ I LOVE HIM!<3

        More than alive is a song on the pop station in sims 3 by him! ๐Ÿ˜€

        What’s your favorite animal? Mines a cat or a wolf.

      • Spongey says:

        Half way done the chapter!!! ๐Ÿ˜€

      • Tonks says:

        Ohhh! That song! Mah second favorite band is…. *drumroll* My Chemical Romance! Da durrrr.

        What is… Your favorite… I’m out of questions….

      • Spongey says:

        I like them too ๐Ÿ™‚ I like a lot of bands XD I listen to a lot of songs.

      • Tonks says:

        My favorite animal is a cat.

        What is your favorite… Hm… Drink?

      • Spongey says:

        My favorite drink is… White grape juice. ๐Ÿ™‚ Favorite soda is Code red moutain dew.

        What’s your least favorite food?

      • Tonks says:

        My least favorite food would have to be… Bleu cheese. It’s just nasty!

        Whom is your favorite actor/actress? My favorite actress would have to be Helena Bonham Carter, ’cause she’s weird and likes to mismatch her shoes on the red carpet. xD

      • Spongey says:

        My least favorite is cheese too! Well, Onions and cheese. They both make me gag! ๐Ÿ˜ก

        My favorite Actor would probably be… Oh my god… so hard! i love so many. Can I just list my favorites? Rob Schneider, Adam Sandler, Robert Downy Jr., Robin Williams, Tim Allen, Jim Carrey. I could honestly go on and on and on XD When it comes to women actresses? I have no idea. .-.

        What’s your favorite sport? Mines probably Basketball I guess.

      • Tonks says:

        My favorite sport would have to be… Hm… Football. And by football I mean soccer, so many people call soccer football but… Grrr… My favorite sport is where you pretty much kick the black and white ball. XDDD

        What is your favorite candy? Not like, a candy bar, just candy.

        Mah favorite candy would have to be Fun Dip. ‘Cause it’s fun! ๐Ÿ˜€

      • Spongey says:

        Oh okay! ๐Ÿ™‚ My best friend was on a soccer… errr.. Football team for a while ^_^

        Mine would have to be Starburst ๐Ÿ˜€ โค YUMMY! I love fun dips too ha ha ๐Ÿ˜€

        What's your least favorite singer? Mine's nicki minaj. GOD. I just want her to shut up! XD

        OH and the chapter is just about finished! ๐Ÿ˜‰

      • Tonks says:

        Nicki Minaj and Avril Lavigne are my least favorite singers.

        Buuuut I must say, Nicki’s child fans can sing rather well…


      • Spongey says:

        Ha ha same here. There both so annoying to me. Like Rap music. I HATE RAP!

        I’m about to post it ๐Ÿ˜‰ Just need to proof read ๐Ÿ˜€ I hope you enjoy it.

      • Tonks says:

        I hope I enjoy it too, and as always, I’ll put two approval stickers on it! :DD

      • Spongey says:

        Ha ha thanks ๐Ÿ™‚ Yea me too. I mean, you *May* not, but we’ll see ha ha

      • Tonks says:

        Well, since the chapter’s coming soon, I better get out my approval stickers! :DDDD

      • Spongey says:

        Ha ha yea! ๐Ÿ˜€ And chapters a GO! ๐Ÿ˜‰ Enjoy.

  11. Liza says:


    Ha ha ha, gullible 6 packed Jed simself.

    Sorry to hear you’re still sick, I am too. My throat is KILLING me, but on the bright side, my dad buys me popsicles and I get to play Pets, which is AWESOME. A lot better then Sims 2 Pets.

    Great chapter as usual!

  12. Liza says:

    Oh, and LOL with Bubba.

  13. elizabeth says:

    ….Your chapter, stupid? HA! This was far from stupid, it was really awesome! ๐Ÿ™‚ You really showed emotion with Micki, I wonder where she and Jeremy are going?! Suspense!
    I hope you’ve been feeling better! ๐Ÿ™‚

    • elizabeth says:

      Oh, and haha about Jed! XD

    • Spongey says:

      ๐Ÿ™‚ Thanks, I am feeling much better than I did. You guys were so sweet in all your “get well soons” Made my sickness not seem as bad! ๐Ÿ™‚

      Awww, thanks! Everyone’s support makes doing this so much easier!! I love it.

      Ha ha, I know. Aren’t I just wrong? I can’t help but mess with him. Makes me giggle! xP

  14. Deanna says:

    I’m working on getting Pets. XD I don’t have all that much money so I have to get my parents or older sister to buy it. xD

    Anyway, poor Micki…. I don’t think her and Jeremy’s romance is going to last considering all the back and forth they’ve been doing not to mention his past and the drunk call. =/ But what teen romance ever really does? XD

    • Spongey says:

      It’s so true. Teens date, and break up all the time. It’s just bound to happen. But there’s has more of a bumpy backround. Not saying they dated, just saying it would make it hard too.

      Pets is super cool ๐Ÿ™‚ I really love it.

      • Deanna says:

        Yeah, it really is. x3 Though my dog made me mad earlier. I was playing and a burglar came up. The dog did nothing. It’ll bark and try to chase away a ghost, but when it comes to a burglar she just goes off and does her own thing while my sim freaked out and her son upstairs ended up calling the police (light sleeper). Oh, and then the Mom had a wish to become friends with the chick that rob her. -_-“”””

        Another stupid thing my dog did. My mom Sim was dying, okay. It was her time to go (actually I kind of forced it on her because elders are really only useful for story making purposes and the bore me to death. D= anyway….) so my dog started harrassing the grim reaper and he let her live. -_-“”” then the dog and the horses played “magic horse/dog that can walk through fencing that doesn’t have a gate nor jump thing (so there’s no actual possible way they could have gotten through)” and when she died again they all crowded around.

        It was a mess. xD But luckily I was able to get Chestnut to go play with her baby (Bolt) and Starlight decided to gallop around the lot. XD For whatever reason Rose (the dog) decided to play with Bolt after that so Chestnut got the bad moodlet the horses get if they’re away from their foal too long. xD Poor Chestnut and Bolt. =(

      • Spongey says:

        LOL! That’s so funny that the dog would do that with the grim reaper, and not the burglar. Isn’t it funny when your horse just runs around like a loon?! I laugh every time!! XD โค

  15. peyton224 says:

    Epicnezz chapter! I ish BANANA!
    Im really bored and i need someone to talk to because my friends got grounded from their phones ._. They need better grades like meh!!!
    Okay,well i agree with tonkandshizz102 (I think thats it?Never rely on memory) when she said Jeremy was choclate ๐Ÿ™‚ Plus,i also want to do something to kindagardeners.(Wow i suck at spelling,and that sounded BAD)
    When Halloween comes,I want to tell the little kids wearing Spider Man,Princesses,and blahrhdfuia,”Hey losers ๐Ÿ™‚ If you dont play Sims 3 you suck broccli *Randomlly throws little chewed up pieces of brocli in their faces* So,tell your mom im awsome,not Murder,and go to my dance recital.Once your their,cheer for me or die.Then for next halloween your the WooHoo thought bubble,*Points At Spider Man* and your the soccer sign,*points to Princess* and im the plumbob.Then your gonna learn simlish in school.”

  16. Liza says:

    Well Jed, it’s not you’re fault Rose is so convincing/devious. She gets it from her mommy, heheheh sorry Sponge. ๐Ÿ˜›

  17. marissa3 says:

    Micki, micki, micki! You can’t chose Jeremy, he’s nor well! he seriously has something wrong with him – and I’m starting to think Micki does too, how could she even consider dating Jeremy!

    Seems like all the bloggers are moving their families to Appaloosa Plains! I want it!!! I went to buy it today… me: ‘Hi do you have the new sims?’ the man: ‘it doesn’t come out until tomorrow.’ DOH! *facepalm*

    Also I LOL’ed so hard at Jed’s six (or was it an eight?!) pack! Hunk Jed!

    • marissa3 says:

      He’s nor well? NOT well I meant.

    • Spongey says:

      XD I know I laughed too when I was taking the pictures. Every time I glanced at him it just made me laugh all over again xD โค I loved it. Yea it's SO awesome there. It's HUGE and soooo open. Theres enough space to do a lot. Yea there is something mentally going on. Nothing TOO serious like Ian, but i'm sure if she gets her act together she can over come it. Hopefully.

  18. kenzie98 says:

    So I am one of your silent readers….not silent any more I guess o_O but anyways I just wanted to say you are an amazing writer haha I’m jealous and I love the name Bubba xD but thats probably just cause I have a friend named Buddy o_o

    • Spongey says:

      Aw Buddy is a cute name ๐Ÿ™‚ โค Yay! I love when my silent readers say stuff ๐Ÿ˜€ Makes me feel happy.

      Awww thanks a bunch! ๐Ÿ˜€ I'm so glad you enjoy reading my legacy ๐Ÿ™‚

      • kenzie98 says:

        haha :)) and another thing I love Makenzie’s name since that is also my name xD haha people always spell my name wrong cause they put a C in it ๐Ÿ˜ not even my own uncle can spell my name….its pretty sad…

      • Spongey says:

        Wow really? That’s your name? ๐Ÿ™‚ I love your name then! xD I think it’s so pretty. Did I spell it like yours? Judging by your username I think I did xD I could never spell Makenzie with a C, it would make it sound different. OH, and don’t worry… I know how you feel. People spell my name wrong ALL the time. Jacqueline. It’s a long name though…

      • kenzie98 says:

        yep its spelled the same way ^.^ and I was wondering how is pets? I cant wait to get it! ๐Ÿ™‚

      • Spongey says:

        Cool! ๐Ÿ˜€ Pets is awesome. The only thing that I don’t like is that in CAS you can’t make baby horses and puppies and kittens. You have to have an adult. I mean, what if someone wants a kitten? Or puppy? :/ Not a full grown animal! I found a way around it, but it takes Longer. Other than that I have to say, that it’s pretty sweet. It’s ten times better than sims 2 pets, and the animals look and act awesome. Espically the interaction where the animal can lick or sniff toddlers! SO adorable.

      • kenzie98 says:

        awww thats so cute โค but yeah I wont like that either :\ I would want to make a puppy or something but noooo haha anyways people say they have to update there mods or something? I started using mods after I got the last expansion pack and so this will be the first one since I started using them so would I have to update them or whatever? if so I have no idea how to do that xD haha sorry that im like asking you these questions…

      • Spongey says:

        I know it would be awesome to just be able to make your own puppy or kitten, without having two parents in-game. But it is what it is. ๐Ÿ™‚ Yea you have to update your mods. Well I could point you in the right direction, if you tell me where you got your mods or what there called! ๐Ÿ™‚

        Pfffttt! Ask as many questions as you like! If I can answer, I will! ๐Ÿ˜€

      • kenzie98 says:

        well I got all mine from mod the sims and some of twallans mods

      • Spongey says:

        Okay. I can point you in the right direction for Twallan, but what mod did you use from MTS?

      • kenzie98 says:

        hmmm I got a few but I will have to go through and figure out which ones are from mod the sims or not but I will have to figure that out in the morning so I’ll tell you then

      • Spongey says:

        ๐Ÿ™‚ Okay just let me know!

  19. Callie says:

    Ahahaa Jed’s making yet another shirtless legacy appearance ^_^
    I hope you aren’t sick any more so you can realise how awesome this chapter was :]
    Poor Jeremy, there’s clearly something wrong. He’s sooo demanding, so controlling, so possessive. This can’t end well unless he can find help.
    LOL AT BUBBA ^_^ oh, and how are Sebie and Callie doing? :] havent heard from their adventures in a while!! xD

    • Spongey says:

      Well Sebie and Calle have been on the DL lately. Just raising Tiger, no new kiddies or anything. There just an all around happy couple ^_^ I’m moving Lear and Sebie, your simmy and mine, uhhh Wolf’s simself and of course Jed’s simself to AP along with Micki and her family of course!! XD So I can keep tabs on them. I promise to give a little update of the simmy selfs next chapter ^_^ Hopefully there will be another baby! ๐Ÿ˜€

      Yea. It’s him who gave me the idea of that happening, since he knows I always have my dudes shirtless. Not that it’s MY fault but it always seems like I do it on purpose XD I find it amusing though. ๐Ÿ™‚ Aww Thanks so much Callie. You guys always know the right things to say. Yea I’m feeling much better, it’s just this cold weather that’s killing me! x_X I get sick so easily.


      Oh, and Bubba…. I don't even… xD

  20. Jonas Legacy says:

    Jackie sinc ePets devoured my legacies and I ahd to restore Jonases from my laptop I also had to delete my mods which I accidently deleted the whole folder ._. So now I have to wait to get Winzip back to get more mods back. FML. But great chapter can’t wait to see what happens with Micki and Jeremy.

    • Spongey says:

      Thanks, I’m glad you liked the chapter ๐Ÿ™‚ Aw I’m so sorry to hear that. It seems that pets and the new patch has really screwed up a lot of peoples games! D:

  21. Morgan says:

    Dang im like a day late all well you win some you lose some. Anyway i hope you get better soon and i loved this chapter . I kinda agree with kaylee i mean raping some one isnt excatly something you can just sweep under the rug :/ but i can see how Micki likes him i mean he is her best friend and he did protect (like the fith time i had to re write that word) her when they where younger. I just hope micki doesnt rush into this and Mister right turn’s up and Jermey goes all phycho. But like i said awsome chapter and get well soon .

    • Spongey says:

      Thanks so much! ๐Ÿ™‚ Yea it’s not something that can get swept under the rug! It’s a terrible act, and it cane be punished harshly if brought to the authorities. Of course Micki said no to her parents, even though they threatned Jeremy 1000 times over. Their just tired of seeing her so depressed. Fraser was at wits end! They don’t know what to do for their poor troubled child. ๐Ÿ˜ฆ If Jeremy isn’t her right, then someone is. Someone is def. waiting for her. โค

      I do feel better, thanks for the get well soon! ๐Ÿ™‚

  22. Liza says:

    YES! For once I’m glad I’m sick, cuz my teacher called my mom and said I was too weak to go on the 7 mile hike! Me no likey hikes.

  23. Brennon says:

    What happened to Dagger, and his kids, and Ethan and his kids? Kitty died right?

    • Spongey says:

      Just lived Seperate lives. I can’t keep tabs on everyone XD Uh, Kitty didn’t die because of a glitch that reset her age bar…. but she should be dead. In my story she passed away.

      • Deanna says:

        Oh, so you had that issue, too? I remember asking you how old she’d been cuz you said she’d been alive forever. XD

        That happened to my sim Arietta. XD Her and her husband were at the same thing and then BAM! She was almost all the way back at the beginning of the Adult stage. =p Carter, Carson, and Arabella were her last children and I don’t want her to have anymore. XD

        Hilariously enough when I was playing on AP today (I have the SP Mod) I went to the horse stables place to do some racing and jumping and I saw three (THREE) pregnant women there. XD I was like “Woah! What the heck?!”

        Oh, I think Micki should have a horse or a cat. Y’know, something for her to hang around with, though if she has a horse then she can leave the house and still have a living thing to talk to as she rides out to the very corners of town. xD

        I moved my Sims’ kids into this actually decently decorated house in AP and then kept them all in my old one after adding Pets stuff. XD

      • Spongey says:

        YEA! I went and checked and she had 85 days left -_- NO. WAY. IN.HELL! Fraser is about to be an OLD man, how the heck could Kitty NOT be dead? Makes no sense.

        Lmao that’s too funny. I hate it so much when the age bar resets! Or doesn’t move at all! Damn you glitches!!

        Ha ha xD I love SP. I need to put it back in.

        It’s funny you would say that, cause check out the new chapter ๐Ÿ˜‰

        I know! I moved in a house and I really didn’t have to do much too it! I was really shocked that EA actually color cordinated things okay!

  24. Emily says:

    Micki is annoying me more and more…

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