Chapter 5.4 – Real Realizations

Authors note: Yea, it’s me again… with yet another warning. This time for “mature” actions. If you catch my drift… It can be kind of descriptive, so if you don’t want to read it or are offended by it, then please skip it. Thanks!

Makenzie’s Point of View

How dare they think they can just snatch me up, and throw me somewhere else? Some forsaken country town, where I obviously don’t belong. Screw them! Screw all of them! I’m going to do what I want, and that’s be with Jeremy. The man I love.

After that tear filled phone call, I ran to Jeremy’s house. And let me just tell you, I made no attempt to look back. I didn’t care how many times my phone buzzed in my pocket, or the echoes of my name came trailing down at me. This was my life, and MY choice. Jeremy moved from his parents house, so they had no idea where I would be. That’s just the way I wanted it too…

So after all of that, I waited at the bottom of his steps. Tears still trickling from my eyes, and my arms gripped around my body. The breeze in the air was biting at my ears, and my body shook – Covered in goosebumps.

I was lost so deep in thought,- from my anger making me have this boiling rage – that I didn’t even notice when Jeremy came up, and stood right in front of me.

“Hey.” Was him humble answer, to break me from my thoughts and come back to reality. I lifted my head to face him, and blinked back a few tears.

Jer-Jeremy.I coughed out, standing quickly to my feet. We both stared at each other for a little bit, unsure of how to come about this awkward moment.

We continued to stare, and shuffle our feet in the gravel, until I grabbed him close. I held onto him tight, and just cried into his shoulder. I was just so scared to let him go. I obviously didn’t want to lose him anymore than I thought I had already.

“There-There trying to take me from y-you. My parents are trying to force me to move almost 6 hours away!” My hands were clenched tight onto the back of his shirt. My knuckles turned white from how hard I was holding on. My speech was broken from my uncontrollable cries, and honestly I thought I was going to lose it altogether.

He gripped my head in his hands, and shushed me. Telling me it was going to be alright, and that he wasn’t going anywhere and that he wouldn’t let them separate us.

We continued standing there like that until an idea popped into my head. Looking back at it now, I don’t think it was the brightest… but I was under a lot of emotional trauma. My brain just wasn’t thinking like it should be.

“Jeremy?” I pulled back from him, looking into his eyes “Come with me.”

He stared at me puzzled, unsure of what I meant. I tugged on him arm, pulling him closer and closer to the house. “Come on.”

I stumbled up the steps, because he was still reluctant to come. He was clueless to say the least, but after I kissed him… he caught on pretty fast. We almost fell through the front door, because our kisses were forceful and full of hormones. We stopped dead center of the living room, where he pressed himself closer to me. That’s where I felt this bulge in his pants, that threw me completely off guard. I pulled back from him slightly, but he only tried pulling me closer.

“Wa-wait.” I stuttered, backing out of his grip. “I want to do this right.”

He nodded his head in agreement, then pressed his lips against mine once again.

“I meant that I want to do this in a private area, Jeremy. Not in the living room of your friends house.” I sighed, pushing him back once more.

“Alright babe.” he breathed heavily, his words pouring out aroused and full of eagerness.

I was taken back by how hot and heavy he was getting so quickly. I’ve never done anything like this before, so the intensity of it all was so nerve wrecking. But I planted it in my mind that I was going to do this, so to move things I along I slipped off my t-shirt, leaving my pants still intact. With me doing this, it gave Jeremy the red flag to go ahead and get almost completely naked.

The site of him being like this brought my breaths to become shallow, and my mouth dry. I was becoming more and more unsure of myself, and everything that was happening. NO! You can’t do this to yourself Micki. This is what you want, and this is what your going to get. So I pressed my lips against his once more, and he felt my body up and down. His touch made shivers run up my spine, and moans to leave my mouth.

Ending the long and power-filled kiss, I drew back and climbed onto his bed. Leaning my half naked body against his backboard, I called for him seductively, patting the empty space next to me. He gave me this shy smile, nearly making me unsure of what he was thinking. It wasn’t until his boxers were completely off, and a condom was slipped on, that I realized he was all for it.

He climbed on top of the bed, crawling up at me. My heart was racing 1000 beats per second, and my eyes wide with anticipation. He pulled at my legs, causing me to slip down onto my back. He climbed over top of me, and just held himself above me, staring into my eyes.

He brushed my hair back, and whispered “You ready?”

I blinked a couple times, then nodded my head yes. He gave me another kiss before yanking off my jeans and tossing them on the floor. Next thing I knew my underwear was around my ankles, and my virginity was gone.

I closed my eyes tight as the pain fell through me from each and every thrust. Tears forced themselves to show, leaking slowly down my cheeks. It was then, and only then… that, that horrible flashback came back into my mind. The one I should have remembered all along. I’m such an idiot!

Now this is where were suppose to be. How hard was that?”

Before he even had the chance to finish, I shoved him off of me and pulling my underwear up as I stumbled out of his bed. Of course being the typical man that he is, he screamed at me and asked me what I was doing!?

I crawled into the corner of his room, and gripped myself up. Crying hard into my knees, cursing at myself for being such a stupid idiot. How could I actually think I loved him?! He raped me! For gods sake… he RAPED me! That isn’t someone you love, it’s someone you bring to the police and have locked away. Or in his case, brought to a mental hospital for some serious help! How could I do this?!? WHY Micki! Why! I was so blinded. My mind just wanted to defend him, because I still saw my Jeremy. I still saw the man who would beat the crap out of bullies for me, and clean up my wounds at his parents house. The man who would stay up late with me on Saturday nights, and watch scary movies until we both passed out on each other. I thought that if I had real sex with him, or actually told myself I loved him… it would actually come true.

God, I was so wrong.

He climbed out of his bed, putting on his boxers on his way over to me. I could feel his eyes piercing the top of my head when he was finally there, so I reluctantly looked up.

“Micki?! What’s wrong with you. I was- Well you know! You messed me up!” he growled, his eyes narrowed.

I stood to my feet. More tears pouring from my eyes. “I CAN’T!” I blurted out “I can’t sleep with you. I can’t be with you, and I can’t… I can’t… love you.

He took a step back. “What are you freaking talking about?! You can’t love me?! What the heck was all the crap outside then? You lied to me?!”

I sighed loudly, wiping the tears from my cheeks. “Jeremy. I tried okay? I really did. But I realize I don’t love you, I just love who I thought you were. Having sex with you only brought me back to reality! The images of you raping me flashed into my mind as I laid there. How could I ever have a healthy relationship with a man who clearly needs help!”

He scoffed. His voice low and dangerous. “Get out of my house. I’m done with you! If you can’t love me, for me, then I sure as heck can’t love you. I waited long enough, and this is the thanks I get? Screw off Makenzie! Go back to your faggot parents, and don’t ever speak to me again.”

My mouth hung open. “Are you serious? Your actually going to treat me like this, after what you did to me? Even after you’ve drunk dialed me AFTER the time you raped me? To think I STILL gave you a chance? You know what? I don’t care. I’m out of here!”

“Good, get out. I don’t need you!” he shouted pointing for the door “GO! NOW!”

That jerkhole didn’t even give me a chance to get dressed. He just threw an old hoodie at me and screamed for me to leave. Not like I wanted to stay anyways, but I was still hurting inside. I know my words came out harsh, but-but… I never thought he would ever talk to me like that! He was my best friend.

My feet hit the cold pavement, thudding hard as I ran. My tears swiped back behind my ears as I ran against the cold wind. I never even took a look back to see if he was watching. I was too upset to do anything. I just wanted to go home, and hold my parents – never letting them go.

I burst through the front door, screaming for my parents.- No one answered. Oh god. They probably went looking for me, and now I’m going to be all alone! What have I done?! I threw my face into the my hands, the sleeves of his hoodie becoming soaked with tears. What made it worse was the jacket smelled like him. How could I get him out of my head, if his smell was entering in and out of my nose!?


Nearly seconds after I screamed for my parents again, Lia came tailing around the corner. Her mouth hung open, her eyes wide with fear. Obviously she was frightened by my demeanor, but I didn’t care. I just wanted her to hold me.

“Oh my god! Makenzie what happened to you!?” Her screeches filled the house, echoing against bare walls. I cried harder, then threw myself into her.

She coddled me. Brushing her fingers throw my tangled hair. My tears caused her to break down and cry with me. She couldn’t help but feel sorry for what ever I had been through. She kept asking me over and over to tell her what happened, but I would only shake my head in her shoulder, crying over again.

By this point, Kaylee came out of the bathroom. Her hair damp, and smells of shampoo trickling from her. Most likely she had just gotten out of the shower, and was unaware of the ruckus going on.

“Oh my god!” she exclaimed, bringing herself nearer to me “Is she alright?! What happened?”

Lia kept patting my back, and rocking me in her arms. She turned to Kaylee shaking her head and saying “I have no idea. She won’t tell me. Here take her into her room and get her into something warm, I need to call Dad and Papa. Tell them she’s alright, so they can stop looking.”

Lia let go of her grip on me, and told me to follow Kaylee. She whipped out her cell phone before I walked off, and called Dad on the phone.

“Hey Dad? It’s Lia. Yea, Makenzie just came in the door right now. She’s really upset. No I don’t know what happened, she won’t tell us. She just keeps crying and holding onto us. Just please come home, you two need to talk with her. Love you too.”

Kaylee helped me out of the hoodie, and into some clean PJ’s. She helped shush my crying, and then finally turned to ask me what happened once more. I shook my head at her, puckering out my lip as to start to cry once more. She lifted her hand awkwardly behind her head, and told me it was alright.

“Please don’t cry anymore Micki.” she sighed, adverting her eyes away “It kills me to see you this upset. Just please tell me what he did to you this time.”

She said it so boldly. Like she knew it was him. Not even asking.

I didn’t even express any emotion when she said that. I just walked completely past her, and crawled into my bed. I was already done talking – or crying – about this. He hurt me, I hurt him, then he hurt me again. It’s safe to say we aren’t meant for each other. Jeremy just needs help, and I need to stay away from men.

“Micki please don’t be like this!” she snapped at me “You know we hate it when you seclude yourself away from us! We’re your family, why won’t you talk to us?”

Her words grew louder, but I continued to ignore her and pulled the blanket over my head. She groaned, then stomped away, flicking off the light as she did so.

My parents tried. My sisters tried. No one could get me to say anything. Usually in terrible situations I would moan or tell them to leave me alone. Nope. I was completely silent, and even though I hate to admit it… they were scared for me. I have NEVER shut them out where I didn’t even make a sound. I felt bad, but I felt worse about everything that happened.

In the middle of the night, around 4 am, I woke up from another nightmare. It’s always the same thing, or close to the same thing. Me in a house with this dark creature touching me, moving his hands around near my face, bringing this cloth near my mouth. I hated it. The only thing that could help me escape was writing. I could unleash all my frustrations into my stories. I had already written a novel about this girl named Liberty and her fight to be free from the clutches of this evil man. Now I think I’ll write about a stressed girl trying to make it in such a cruel world. Sounds familiar doesn’t it?

Micki Myra Marie Plenty. The girl who tried to live a fairytale, but when reality came crashing down… so did everything she believed in.”


The house was silent. The only known sound was coming from the heavy breaths from my mouth. I was alone, but felt a presence around me. I sat calmly on this small bed, in this tiny room. The light shade next to me wouldn’t turn on, so I was forced to stay in the dark.

The silence of the house was soon disrupted by slow creaking of the floor boards. Each step that the figure took made my heart beat a little faster, and my throat close up. I wanted to move, but I had no where to go. I was trapped inside this room, with no escape. I had to face the figure, and pray that I lived.

It was blurry but for the first time I actually could make out his face. It looked so familiar, but I had no idea who this man was. As it turned out the figure that haunted me was in fact a real person. To actually see his face caused me to jump, and my heart to race. He called out my name so lifelessly, and that’s when I awoke from my sleep with a cold sweat.


I didn’t even realize I fell asleep until it was too late. One moment I’m packing, the next I’m dreaming about creepy men I’ve never meant. GOD! Can I ever win? I’m trying to move on with my life, and yet, my dreams – scratch that, NIGHTMARES are always following me around, popping their ugly heads into my life. Moving was a hard task. Moving when you didn’t have the strength, will power, or a freaking care in the world about… made it that much harder.

“Please just let this moving thing be over so I can get on with my life. It’s been weeks and I just don’t feel like doing anything anymore. Can’t I just give up? Seems like a good plan to me.” I told myself out loud. I sounded terrible, but it’s how I felt. It’s funny how one moment in your life, can screw you up so badly.


That dreadful day finally came. We were going to be driving 6 hours to Appaloosa Plains, and we hadn’t even left yet and I was already feeling that detachment phase people go through when there going to leave houses they grew up in. I held my head down low as I took one last look around my old room. This is it Makenzie. Your life is going onto bigger and better things.

That’s what I told myself, but I didn’t even believe it. What’s so great about starting over?

My Pa Pa came in, only smiling slightly when he saw my reaction to everything. He didn’t try and force me to get into the car, but he did nudge the idea that it was time to go. I sighed loudly, and shook my head. I guess this is it.

“You ready to get going kiddo?”

I nodded. “Yea. I guess so.”

I started for the door, but he stopped me. I glared, completely puzzled and he opened his mouth to speak.

“Listen and listen good.” he started “You. Makenzie Destiny Terrey. Are a beautiful, and strong young lady. No matter what others have told you, or what you may tell yourself, it will always be the god honest truth, that you are an amazing person. It shouldn’t matter what some jerk boy said to you. If he can’t accept what you’ve told him, then he is no-good and never will be. Makenzie, I love you with all my heart, and so does your Dad and sisters. We care for your safety and your happiness, and it kills us to see you hurt. Baby girl, no matter what you and your sisters will always be first in our lives. No matter what you do, or go through… WE will be here for you, because we love you. I know I’m just dad, talking your ear off… but I mean every word I’m saying. Your special, and you deserve the best there is. Your a princess, and should be treated as such!”

My mouth whimpered, and a tear fell from my eye. I’ve never had my Pa Pa say so much at one time. Of course I’ve heard them say sweet things to me all my life, but I always brushed it off. But to be stopped in my tracks, and be told things I would never ever tell myself, lifted my heart. I thanked my father so much for being here for me, and I apologized for everything I had done. He just smiled, and kissed the top of my head saying that he forgave me along time ago. Heck, he couldn’t even be angry at me. Both him and my dad.

“Well.” he laughed “Now that we got that off our chest, do you think your ready to go now sweet heart?”

I smiled.

“As long as I get shot gun!”

He laughed harder. “Oh alright. We’ll make your dad sit in the back!”

“Sounds good to me!” I laughed in return, following my Pa pa out to the car, saying my final good bye to where I grew up.

We left our old house at 6:30 am, and arrived at our new house around 1 o’ clock. We were all completely exhausted, and couldn’t wait to get into our beds and conk out. Our new house was AMAZING, and so much bigger than our old one! My parents told me it wasn’t easy to get this house, nor was it cheap, but it was worth it.

The moment I got out of the car, I made a beeline for the house. Before I even had a chance to bolt it up the steps my Pa pa called over to me, giving my Dad this sly grin. What were they doing now?

“Come on Micki. I have something I want to show you.”

I sighed, then smiled. “Alright, alright. Let’s make it quick though, I’m SO fu- Err… freaking tired.”

My Pa pa glared at me, then rolled his eyes.

“What?” I laughed, following him out back of our new house.

“Pa pa what is this all ab-” I froze. My whole demeanor changed, and a smile spread across my face. I didn’t know if it was the shock or the excitement, but I don’t think I’ve ever been this happy in my entire LIFE!

“I don’t believe it!!”

A FOUL! A baby horse! A freaking PONY! What ever you wanted to call it, that’s what it was. I can’t believe my parents got me a horse. It’s like every little girls dream! Just in time for my birthday too! Could this get any better?!

“You got me a horse? Oh Pa pa! He’s beautiful!” I gleamed, nearly jumping up and down.

“SHE.” he laughed “And her name is Shadow. Her poor mother was killed, and the guy who sold her to me said she was too stubborn to keep. He said he was either going to put her down, or let her go. I felt so bad, so I bought her. She’s a frisky little thing, and really hot-headed. Reminds me of someone.” he winked at me, before trying to give shadow a little pet. She whinnied, lowering her ears to him. Wow he wasn’t kidding! She really is a tough cookie.

I love her already.

Tour time!

Living Room.

Front entrance/Stairs

Dining room


Micki’s room

Upstairs Entertainment room / Bathroom

Thanks for reading!! I’m really sorry if I’m bumming you guys out with these chapters. I don’t mean to make them sound so depressing, but everything I do leads to the next part of Micki’s life. Shadow is a mean little thing! She doesn’t let anyone in easily, and she’s very secluded. Doesn’t that sound like Makenzie? Lol. Hope this chapter was okay! It’s safe to say I’m over my sickness ๐Ÿ™‚ Thanks for all the “get wells” and sweet comments<3 Love all you guys!!


Next chapter will have a simself update! ๐Ÿ™‚


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"My fake plants died because I did not pretend to water them." - Mitch Hedberg
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213 Responses to Chapter 5.4 – Real Realizations

  1. Tonks says:


  2. sariechiny says:

    Yayy another chapter!!!(:
    I’m gonna go back and read it more thoroughly this time<3

      • sariechiny says:

        OMGGG IT’S A HORSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D:D:D:D
        Haha, it’s funny how you made Shadow like Micki(: I hope Shadow’s going to be a good companion to Micki in the future…
        Oh dear…Micki, why did you go back to him???D: Sigh…at least I think Jeremy’s gone for good…at least I hope xP

      • Spongey says:

        Let’s hope so! It didn’t seem like he wanted anything to do with her anymore anyways. Teehee, you like? ๐Ÿ˜‰ Oh I’m pretty sure little Shadow will get along with Micki just swell. It’s everyone else she has a problem with! xD

        ๐Ÿ˜€ I told you I was gonna use pets!!! ๐Ÿ˜€

      • sariechiny says:

        Pets looks awesome(: Can’t wait to get it!!!

      • Spongey says:

        It really is awesome ๐Ÿ˜€ One of my new favorite EP.

  3. Tonks says:

    *puts 100 of approval stickers on this chapter*

    Lia’s such a sweetie. ๐Ÿ™‚

    And… Duh durrr, Brent, get out of Micki’s nightmares! D:<

    • Spongey says:

      No it’s fine. Your allowed to say who he is, it’s obvious ๐Ÿ˜‰ Your gonna see soon enough why she has these dreams. Tis’ all part of my many plans.
      Yea she is ๐Ÿ™‚ Aw 100?! Your too sweet ๐Ÿ˜‰

      • Tonks says:

        Well, I would’ve put on infinite, but I don’t have that many, it’s not like they magically appear. XD

        Where did Brent go anyways? Was there a chapter I missed where he got taken away? O_o

      • Spongey says:

        Brent and Heather left remember? It’s before he left why Micki has these nightmares. Will be explained later on ๐Ÿ˜‰

        Ha ha Noooo, it’s not like they do at all! ๐Ÿ˜‰

      • Tonks says:

        Brent and Heather dadadadaaa… Oh yeah! I remember! XD

        Blarghishshohargh has a new short chapter!

        Lulz… I’ve magically remembered the name Blarghishshohargh…

      • Spongey says:

        XD That’s so funny that you memorized that! Glad you remember ^_^

      • Tonks says:

        ^I made a mistake in the last one. D:

        *shrieks* It’s tomorrow all ready! OMFG TIME TO JOG TO MCDONALD’S!

      • Spongey says:

        Ha ha xD Yea time flies ๐Ÿ˜‰ It’s so funny, cause I can’t even read that name let alone spell it XD

      • Tonks says:

        Jeremy is no longer a good chocolate.

        He is a bad, stale, one under the carpet. .-.

      • Spongey says:

        Ha ha yea he is. Nasty dark chocolate is what he is. (I hate dark chocolate. Icky)

      • Tonks says:

        I actually nearly punched my computer when he said such a rude word about Micki’s parents.

        Fraser and Scott shoulda kicked his ass!

      • Spongey says:

        Yea, well… they didn’t hear him, Micki did. She was in complete shock that he said it :/

      • Tonks says:

        Yeah, that is true… ๐Ÿ˜ฆ

        *ZOMG* I’m still making the over-populated town, but as usual, i’m filling it with fuglies. -.-

      • Spongey says:

        XD Ha ha, why fuglies?

      • Tonks says:

        I always make fuglies by mistake, and I always give them weird names, like, “Bubba” and “Fez”. XD

      • Spongey says:

        BUBBA! Like my simselfs kid XD So epic. I try to make pretty sims too but sometimes I have flops. :s

      • Tonks says:

        I had a huge flop making Anneke from Around My Sims (or, Around The Sims 3) in TS2, and she’s such a beauty for a sim. *-*

        I used to call my sister Bubba, and I’ve started doing it again because she looks even more like a man with her shaved head. XD

      • Spongey says:

        XD Lol! that’s so funny. I’d probably do the same thing if I had a sister, and her hair was all shaved XD

        Oh rly? I don’t think I’ve seen her sim.

      • Tonks says:

        My sister is now refusing to come home from college every day ’cause I call her Bubba. ^-^ (She doesn’t live with us, she’s just broke so when her classes are over she has to ride over and get our own dinner. Ah… Such a lovely sister. XD)

        She’s quite a nice looking sim, and she has two toddler boys.

        No offense to Anneke (No offense to a sim? O_o), but Anneke’s husband is a fugly. D:

      • Spongey says:

        XD Lol no offense to a sim. Thats funny. Lol! Your poor sister XD

      • Tonks says:

        I’m still filling my TS2 town with fuglies and meanies. D:

        I made a little girl named Lily, and she went to the store and kept bullying a little nerdy boy named Christopher. D:

  4. Tonks says:


  5. wolfmania98 says:

    This chapter really reminds me of the saying ‘Every cloud has a silver lining,’ Jeremy is horrible ๐Ÿ˜ฅ If your ‘girlfriend’ cries, you dont shout at them. Love the new house. Im glad to see Micki lightening up. Shes so pretty when she smiles :D. And PETS!!! I got mine, and I love it. Shadows adorable ๐Ÿ™‚

    • Spongey says:

      Your so right. She said she changed her mind, you don’t bash her down! If he loved her he would have really just let her go. It seemed he was only trying to use her to begin with. I KNOW! I’m so glad someone pointed that out, ’cause I felt the same way ๐Ÿ™‚ She has such a pretty smile.

      I love pets!! ๐Ÿ˜€ It’s awwweessoommmeee.

  6. ieheli says:

    Finally she got away from Jeremy. I liked him at first, but after that incident.. I love Micki and her new pet. I want to hug them both. ๐Ÿ™‚
    I had one question. Did your game crash when you installed Pets? Because mine is just a mess.

    • Spongey says:

      Yea she did, and even though she thinks she might regret it… she made the right choice. ๐Ÿ˜‰ I know! ๐Ÿ˜€ Shadow is a fiesty little thing!

      No, and if yours is it’s probably because you need to update your mods. ๐Ÿ™‚

  7. jayluvsu says:

    ZOMG! I went to this to see if anything or anyone was breathing, and I found this! ๐Ÿ˜€

    *takes Tonks’s seal of approval stickers and sticks a few on this chapter*

    …Aaaand, I type like a normal person and I have a more proper way of spelling!
    Isn’t it just great, how life can treasure you with less annoying things? Lol.

  8. Brennon says:

    I don’t have pets until tomorrow! Or today, since it’s 5 am where I am. I’m still trying to get a wordpress account set up to do my own legacy. Ahh, I’m so not good with that stuff :/. I knew there would be some animal or something in this chapter. I’m kind of upset Jeremy ended up being such a jerk, but Micki deserves better.

    • Spongey says:

      Yea she does deserve better. He was never really good for her anyways ๐Ÿ˜ฆ Oh making a WP account is really simple! ๐Ÿ™‚ It’s like signing up to any other site ^_^ โค If you have any questions let me know.

      • Brennon says:

        Maybe you can help me. I don’t know how to post like chapters, and other post under a page, and not have them on the home page.

      • Spongey says:

        Ohh I know what that is. Click on my dashboard, then Settings, then Reading. Where it says โ€œFront page displaysโ€ on the top of the page, click on a โ€œstatic pageโ€ It will let you pick what page you want as frontpage, and it will never change xD You need to make a page for your home page, and a page to put chapters on ๐Ÿ™‚ WordPress can be hard to understand a first, but you’ll get use to it ^_^

    • Brennon says:

      Okay, so I got that, but I still don’t understand how I like put the chapters on there, like most other legacies are. Where, you go to the chapters, and it will say chapter 1.1 or 1.2 and then you can click on that to go the chapter. I have a page for chapters, and one for home. I made a post and it’s in chapters, but like I said, I need chapters for like a table of contents, and home is for posts, like updates on new chapters or something. I’m really sorry for bothering you with my questions.

      • Spongey says:

        Okay. You make a page, and name it chapters. When you actually make a chapter, you publish it, then take the link to the published chapter and copy it. Go back to you chapters page and edit it. Type something like… Chapter 1.1 Then hightlight the words, and click this little thing at the top that kinda looks like a paper clip. When you click on it, it will pop up a box, and you put the link in there. Now your link is saved under the chapter 1.1, and all you have to do now is update the page and your good to go.

  9. Liza says:

    Sponge, this was AMAZING! Omg, Micki, WTH WERE YOU DOING? Thank GOD you came to your senses at the right time. And Jeremy, you are such a meaner! Calling Fraser and Scott that word makes my blood boil. I love Shadow, she’s exactly like Micki. I’m trying to figure out how to work a pet into my story. I have Appaloosa Plains worked in, but not a pet yet. Debating whether they should have horse, dog, or cat. My cat loving self says cat, but Ryan would be just ADORABLE with a foal.

    Sorry for the rambling, great chapter!

    • Spongey says:

      Thanks so much! ๐Ÿ™‚ It’s so true, it’s a good thing she came to her sense, cause his reaction spoke 1000 words. He really wasn’t the one for her, and she deserves much better. I thought it would be cool if she had a horse, cause she likes to be alone, and riding with her horse (if Shadow ever lets her that is!) would be good for her. It’s easy to work one in. They could find the animal or just adopt it, for the heck of it. Maybe even be a gift like Micki’s was! ๐Ÿ™‚

  10. Laura says:

    Amazing chapter as always! Just to let you know, I was looking at the family tree and someone changed Yoki’s name to Ghn X. Can’t wait to see how Micki and Shadow bond ๐Ÿ™‚

    • Spongey says:

      LMAO! What the hell kinds of name ? XD I feel bad cause I don’t know how to change it back or work that family tree :XSomeone made it for me, so they would have to do it. Thanks so much! ๐Ÿ™‚

  11. Rainie92 says:

    Omg y did she do do that :-O silly silly ๐Ÿ˜€ anyway I loved the chapter and I so wish I could have pets early but for once I have to wait till Christmas my inlaws are getting it for me ๐Ÿ˜ฆ anyway I hope she has better luck with love ( maybe with a girl :-D) lol

    • Spongey says:

      Ha ha, your the second person to say that Rain. It’s so funny xD But no, I’m pretty sure Micki is strictly straight. She really doesn’t go for the whole Lesbo thing XD Pets is awesome ๐Ÿ™‚ Your gonna love it.

  12. OMG! LIKE BEST DAY EVER!!!!!!!!! New update AND it’s my little cousins birthday whos like sooo adorable ahahaha. MUST READ NOW!!

    • Oh Maaa goshh ๐Ÿ˜€ Awesome chapter!! It really cleared up a lot of my confusion -_- Im slow like that… lol Anywho i love the house, and the horsie is like soo cute. I really wanna drive to walmart and get sims pets AHAHAH.

      • Spongey says:

        You should ๐Ÿ˜€ It’s an amazing EP! ๐Ÿ˜‰ Thanks a bunch! I’m so glad you enjoyed the chapter ^_^<3 I know, some chapters can be confusing, but I need to leave people hanging so they come back for more ๐Ÿ˜‰

    • Spongey says:

      Ha ha ๐Ÿ˜‰ Enjoy the chapter!

  13. elizabeth says:

    What, Micki?! You thought you could trust Jeremy?!!!!! D: Ugh, what an inconsiderate jerk! I keep putting mixed comments about Jeremy, but I’ve decided: I hate him. ๐Ÿ˜ฆ
    I’m glad Micki can have a fresh start in Appaloosa Plains, can’t wait to see what happens there, and with Shadow. ๐Ÿ™‚ That was so sweet what Scott said, Micki really needed that.
    This was a really awesome chapter, probably your best (in my opinion) but they’re all great!

    • Spongey says:

      She thought she could because of something in her head. I’ll explain later, it all fits in with what I’m doing ๐Ÿ˜‰ Yea she needs a new start! Somewhere away from all that drama. To just be in the open plains, and to get Shadow use to her ๐Ÿ™‚ Yea, Scott really needed to say that too her. She needed to hear it. She’s a great girl, and doesn’t need to think other wise!

      Aw thanks!! ๐Ÿ™‚ โค

  14. nahshona says:

    Good Riddance Jeremy and here’s hoping Micki finally gets started on the healing process. Pets do help with that sort of thing.

    On a side note, I’m dying over here because I can’t wait to get Pets!

    • Spongey says:

      I’ve must of said this about 100 times now, but pets is AWESOME! Your gonna love it ;D The pets just add this whole different side to the game, and it’s amaazing.

      You got that right. Now let’s hope Micki can learn to heal ๐Ÿ™‚

  15. Jedidiah says:

    Let me echo what most of the comments already stated: Good riddance Jeremy! Now, he’s seriously disturbed! As my pastor would say, Jeremy has rocks in his head. XD And way to be defensive, buddy! Lashing out your embarrassment/anger/sexual frustration/whatever by calling Mikki and her family names! Yeah, that’s gonna make a girl wanna do the dirty dirty with you big time! *eye roll*

    The house looks very nice. Did you built it? I always go with pre-made ones. I’m lazy like that. LOL I’m happy to see that Mikks’s family is trying to shake her out of her seclusion even though they are not successful. At least it looks like her papa touched her and a little crack was happening in her wall. Although she probably will lose her peace again with that loon Brent lurking around. Give that girl a break, woman! ;P

    Yeah, looks like Scott had the right idea with bringing Shadow into her life. Sometimes when we see others going through the same thing it makes us aware of our stuff. But it’s not always easy to ask for help.
    And I’ll stop sounding all stuffy and grown up. Because I’m not. ๐Ÿ˜› Yay for you feeling better!

    • Spongey says:

      Yea I never had plans for them to really be together anyways. Just something she had to go through to get her to the end ๐Ÿ˜‰ Yes Jeremy is a very disturbed kid/man/boy what ever you want to call him. He honestly didn’t really care about her enough to call her family names, then through her out half naked. It isn’t getting him anywhere but a lonely disturbed life, with someone he will never get to know. Who cares! Micki deserves better!

      Aw thanks Jed! No I didn’t build it. I’m on the same page as you, waYYYY too lazy to build a house! xD It came with AP, but I just redecorated. Everyone always ask me if I built my houses cause of the redecorating. Lol it’s just color meshing, and moving stuff where it should be! :D<3 Yea there not 100 % successful, but it's the thought that counts. Micki sees the effort they put into too. She may seclude herself, but she knows her family loves her and cares for her. Oh my god I know finally! Scott managed to ram that bull dozer into her soild steel wall she has built around her heart, yet only a teeny little crack got through. It's a hell of a good start though!! Plus that horse? Really made her day. Oh come onnnnn, if I just made her story sunshine and roses, wheres the fun!? I need excitement as much as the next person! ;P โค

      No it's not always easy to ask for help, espically if you have a personality like Micki. She doesn't trust many, and now she has this little baby horse, who is EXACTLY like her. Ha ha I know that ;P No need to tell me your still a kid! XD Yup! I'm so glad I'm not sick anymore ๐Ÿ˜€ โค

      -Spongey (Wow… this was a really long reply XD)

  16. jaec52609 says:

    im glad micki realized she wasnt rlly in love wit jeremy, 2 bad it wasnt soon enough…i had the pregnancy lullybye ringin in my head until u said he didnt finish…but she could still be prego…i guess were jus gunna have 2 wait nd see…was tht guy in her dream jeremy wit hair? the scar on the nose is wat makes me think its jeremy beat 2 hell nd back……scott is so sweet….the horse is micki alright lol…..the house is amazing…..

    • Tawny says:

      It was brent, her cousin. Son of Heather, you can look at the family tree to see.

    • Spongey says:

      Yea she realized it, and it scared the crap out of her too! That’s why she shoved him off, and jumped out of the bed right away! Well, you’ll just have to see but I always drop hints as to what I’m doing ๐Ÿ˜‰ No it was Brent. Remember? The evil little cousin? That’s who she’s been having nightmares about, but she doesn’t remember him. You’ll see what happens ๐Ÿ˜‰

      I know, Scott is a sweet heart. Always knows the right things to say! ๐Ÿ™‚ Ha ha isn’t she? Just like Micki! That’s why Scott got her for her! There both the same!

      Thanks! ๐Ÿ™‚ Glad you like it.

  17. Tawny says:

    Yay! Jeremy is gone Micki is happy and everything is going to be good! Not!! I see your intentions Spongy, your evil evil intentions. tsk tsk xD

    So finallly Micki sees truth, took her long enough, but good job Micki, you see truth now! *claps*
    I predict that Micki and Shadow will heal together! (wonderful animal-human bond time i see coming) I would have never guessed Micki would squeel for a horsey. You should do a mini story from Shadows point of view with the killing of her mother and the man that kept her. Just saying;)
    You must show us the wonderful sights of AP, with your wonderful photo taking skills.

    Hmm this comment was more different than how I usually comment oh well! I have mixed personalities >:)

    • Spongey says:

      LOL! I love how you ended it with “NOT”. You guys really think I’m going to let it be that easy? You really know me so well ๐Ÿ˜€ โค

      Yea it was good for her to finally have a mental break through. She was unblinded. xD Yea they will have a chance to bond, and heal with one another. So sweet ๐Ÿ™‚ โค
      I should, but how do I make a horse talk?! O_o XD

      I will!! I plan to take lots of pictures. Aw thanks for the compliment ๐Ÿ™‚ โค I try my best with photo taking!

      Ha ha it's fine! :)<3 Comment how you want ;D

  18. peyton224 says:

    You can make him talk like the horse from Black Beauty ๐Ÿ™‚
    Jeremy made My Micki too FAT! IM GONNA EAT YOU UP JEREMY! YOU MADE MY DOG DIE! FUDGE YOU!!!!(Jeremy is eaten choclate in my tummy XD But he taste like dog crap! Lulz )
    YAY!! AP! It sounds like “Apple-loosa Plains” Dont ya think?
    “Awww a Teddy Bear! How adorable! You know my name is Teddy!”
    I ish obbssed with Disney!
    So how is pets? Did you hear about the lady that has commitment issues and shes really frou frou and she has horsie themed stuff in her bedroom and one of her cat’s bios says shes scared to go upstairs because of the thumping and red lights?!!?

  19. Morgan says:

    Ugh great Brent is back. I just hope he isnt back to stealing candies from babies and hitting little girls smh. I’m so glad that Scott could get throught to Micki, even if it was just alittle bit, But thats better than nothing! ๐Ÿ™‚ And good ridences, see ye, bye bye, dont let the door hit you where the good lord spilt you, arvidurch, bon vouj, Peace out JERMEY!!!:D haha (even though i know i only spelt have of them right). And yay horses! I love hores, i raise horses. EH i trying to cram everything i have to say into this. Glad your feeling bettter and loved the chaptered. ๐Ÿ™‚

  20. kenzie98 says:

    Loved this chapter :3 HORSEY!! haha and about updating mods before I install pets, its only the main ones like say I got new default eyes or pose player right? or do I also have to do it for the normal ones like hair and furniture?

    • Spongey says:

      Noooo! Just core mods! Like Twallan’s. Not CC! ๐Ÿ™‚ Thanks so much! Glad you loved it ^_^

      • kenzie98 says:

        okay so then I guess that I only have a few like the woohooer and such? I mean that is a core mod right? haha I dont understand mods that well yet so I probably sound pretty stupid… xD

      • Spongey says:

        Yes. If you have any Twallan mods they need to be updated asap.

        Here’s the link:

      • Deanna says:

        Twallan’s mods are tuning mods not core mods. You’re not supposed to have to update them with every new patch/expansion, but with this one you did because they changed file types for CC. Which is why for some people some CC items are broken. Most are still usable, though, they’re just missing things. xD Ex: CC bookshelves will be missing the books sitting on them and CC bathtubs won’t fill with water as they should. XD

      • Spongey says:

        Ah sorry, I forgot the name of them. I remember having to update every time there was a new patch. Well every time there was a new EP anyways. Yea it’s a good thing I don’t have a lot of CC funiture XD I never really cared for it! Only paintings, and rugs, and decorations which all still work! Ha ha XD Oh and hairs and clothes are fine too. Even though my game ATE some of them ._.

      • kenzie98 says:

        lol yep I dont get a lot of furniture either im afraid to get somethings cause my game is really sketchy x.x like right now its not working :[ im able to start it and every thing but once I start trying to like get on one of my saves or start a new one it starts loading then crashes ๐Ÿ˜ฆ btw thanks for the link ๐Ÿ™‚

      • Spongey says:

        It’s because you haven’t updated the mods. Did the same thing for me. Once you update them you will be fine ๐Ÿ™‚

      • kenzie98 says:

        hmmm you were right lol yep its working ^.^ but that seriously scared me cause once I had to go 3 months without playing cause my sims game doesn’t like working with windows 7 very much :[

      • Spongey says:

        Told yah so ^_^ It was just the mods giving you a scare. Once updated they work perfectly! ๐Ÿ˜€ โค Glad you can play now.

      • kenzie98 says:

        oh I forgot to mention how adorable shadow is โค I tried to let my sim have a horse and I named it cowboy but it didn't work out so I got rid of it and then I was going to adopt another pet and I saw cowboy again and I was so tempted to get him back but I didn't :\

      • Spongey says:

        Awwww<3 I know what you mean. I got a kitten and then I didn't want it anymore so I get rid of it, but then I realized I wanted it back :/

  21. plumbobby220 says:

    Great chapter, the start made me sad but at least Jeremy is gone, Death to Jeremy (sorry that’s a little dark). I hope to see more chapter’s where Micki isn’t tormented lol.

    • Spongey says:

      ๐Ÿ™‚ Thanks. Lol that is a little dark, but it’s how you feel.

      Me too! D: I’m sorry! I don’t mean to make everything about her so depressing. I just have to do it for a reason.

  22. Deanna says:

    Y’know what’s funny? I knew you were going to work Brent back in somehow. xD I knew his face was familiar, but I had to look at it a couple of time before realizing “OMG! That’s Brent!” and slapping my forehead. xD

    I โค Pets. x3 And Shadow is so very adorable. =3 Did you already have that worked out or did you take what I said last chapter and use it? XD

    I love the idea of having horses, but I'm mad because I can't get my two dogs to have puppies. Boo. =( I โค my foal, though. I didn't have a lot of room anymore, though, so I ended up having to sell him. =(( So now it's just Chestnut and Mustang (a new one that I made to go with the guy my simmy is marrying). XD

    I really need to get working on that legacy of mine so I can start posting it. =3

    So I'm assuming we're going to see Brendan again sometime. I assumed that that was where this was going. I mean, he did hurt her when he was a toddler if I remember correctly.

    • Spongey says:

      Well I had too! It fits into her nightmares! :s

      Yea. I know โค I love little Shadow. Such a pretty little thing. Ha ha no, I was already going to do that. I had the pictures like two days ago :3 I found it funny you would say that though about adding a horse or cat. It made me laugh cause I already did! ๐Ÿ˜€

      I know you really do!! I want to read it so bad! XD โค

      Maybe. Maybe not. It's the outcome of her nightmares that's more important ๐Ÿ˜‰ Brent did something to Micki as a small baby, that caused her trauma. This trauma is giving her nightmares. The nightmares are symbols more than what actually happened. ๐Ÿ˜‰

      • Deanna says:

        Yeah, I’m kind of hoping that we do see Brent again. XD Whether he was mean or not I still miss him. xD

        So how did you get Shadow? XD Made her parents and had them have a foal or what? XD And I’m either smart of psychic. XD Your guess. xD

        I found a different hair that I can use until we can find that one that Cale originally had. =D So I can just say he got a hair cut when we find it/get it. xD

        Yeah, I assumed way back when she was a toddler and then on to a kid when the nightmares first started that it had something to do with Brent. I think it’d be funny (but also sad) if Heather ended up dead for whatever reason (alcohol poisoning or something, maybe. XD) and he ends up coming to Fraser and Scott begging to stay or something. xD As you can see, I wanna see Brent again and maybe it’ll be something that’d show Micki what her nightmares are all about. xD

      • Spongey says:

        Lol xD You miss him? He was a disturbed creep! xD He found pleasure in hurting people. Your so funny XD

        Yup! ๐Ÿ™‚ I just took a girl horse, and randomly bred her with some other horse in the center place. Shadow came out all funky looking, but I recolored her in CAS.

        SWEET! I’m so glad to hear you not letting a dumb hairstyle hold you back! ๐Ÿ˜€ Can’t wait for you to start the legacy.

        Oh I already have something planned on showing her nightmares ๐Ÿ˜‰ You’ll seeee!

  23. ๐Ÿ˜€ I love the new house!!! ๐Ÿ™‚ I got pets as well, it’s freakin AWESOME!!!! Sorry, I’m just overly exited ^^’ I got pets then the new chapter, It’s a happy day for me ๐Ÿ˜€
    Awwww, the foal is to DIE for ๐Ÿ˜€
    Great chapter! ๐Ÿ™‚ I also knew that Jeremy wouldn’t be staying long ๐Ÿ˜‰
    Wow, I’m smarter than I thought… ๐Ÿ™‚

    • Spongey says:

      Ha ha I guess we do learn new things everyday! ๐Ÿ˜‰ I love little Shadow. She’s just so awesome. I feel bad that she doesn’t have a mommy, but I know Micki will fill those shoes ๐Ÿ˜‰ She’s a sweet heart deep down. Shes just never really had the chance to show it. Thanks!! I think making a new house every enviroment gives a fresh start ๐Ÿ™‚ No one wants to see the same thing all the time! That would get so boring xD

      Thanks!! Glad you enjoyed it.

      • Deanna says:

        Speaking of the house, is that one that’s actually in AP or did you get it off the web? XD I’m curious cuz I wanna try to find it. XD

        Shadow is definitely adorable. =3 I love that horse already. =D Are ya gonna share with us what her traits are in the chapters or just leave it? XD

      • Spongey says:

        I’m going to share the traits ๐Ÿ™‚ It will be nice for everyone to know how she is ๐Ÿ˜‰ It’s just right in AP. I just redecorated the house ๐Ÿ™‚ It’s really nice. It has like 5 bedrooms and 3 bathrooms I think XD

      • Deanna says:

        Do you remember what the address for it was? XD I could use a big one like that. XD The house I’m using right now for my family is a bit too small. xD I’d extend it, but that would end up having to do with me tearing apart the house and yard just to get it to work nicely. xD

        And yay! I wanna know Shadows traits. xD

      • Spongey says:

        Ha ha I have no idea XD I’ve barely played in it, let alone know where in the AP it is XD Come to think of it, I’ve never known the addresses for my sims. I’m a sad case xD

        No worries! ๐Ÿ˜‰ I’ll tell them just for you.

  24. Tonks says:

    I, actually, now feel bad for Jeremy.

    No, no, I’m not right, or wrong. Really.

    Jeremy has issues. He wasn’t using Micki, he has issues.

    He needs help, and he needs more than therapy.

    Now, lemme have a huge never-ending comment.

    What Micki Saw (That Night):
    Being used by some asshole.

    What Jeremy Saw (That Night, The Night He Was Drunk, Maybe More Nights):
    Nothing. He was blinded by something not real.
    The problem is, he cannot see reality 98% of the time.

    He’s seen Micki, the actual Micki, but to him, he hasn’t seen her very many times.

    That’s where the problem begins, and ends.

    I’m assuming, Micki will never see his face again. Alright, that’s smart.

    But if you read the chapters Jeremy are in closely and carefully, you’ll see he has no idea where reality is. He thinks he’s his dad most of the time.

    When he was raping Micki, he thought he was his dad.

    When Micki shoved him off, Jeremy was Jeremy again.

    When Jeremy told the story, of course, he was Jeremy.

    But narrating it so well, makes it seem like he enjoyed what his father did. He enjoyed watching the sex, but pretended he hated it to not seem like a weird perv.
    But he doesn’t.

    He has multiple “people”.

    Okay… So there’s no way to end this this way, but…

    His last thought will be, “I love you Micki”.

    So… Is anyone gonna say, “That’s stupid?” Or, “I don’t get it?”
    If so, I have plenty of explanation stickers. ^-^

    • Deanna says:

      I get what you’re saying and I actually kind of have to agree.

      Plus, it’s not Jeremy’s fault that he went through all of that as a child, so a lot of it he wouldn’t be doing if he had a therapist or a psychiatrist.

      I feel bad for Jeremy…..

      • Spongey says:

        Yea I feel bad for him too, but it doesn’t mean that Micki and him are meant for each other. Just means that Jeremy has problems, and maybe after he’s sorted them out he’ll find Mrs. Right. Micki just can’t be that. There’s too much tension between them now, and it’s really just getting too out of hand. She needs a fresh start, with new faces.

      • Tonks says:

        I actually just wrote this when I was angry at myself for… Um, stuff. But I actually agree with 99% of the things I said in here. ^-^

    • Spongey says:

      I don’t think it’s stupid, I think its a reasonable explanation, except Jeremy DIDN’T like watching his dad, and he didn’t like the fact that he killed his sister! D: He was very tramuatized, that when under the influence he had this mental break down and didn’t realize what was real, and who he was! He’s a very disturbed person, and thats all there is. He sort of did push Micki into making a descion and making her “think” she loved him, when she didn’t. Never like that anyway. Jeremy was kind of being very pushy, even if he didn’t mean it. Micki is a very troubled girl, and that wasn’t easy for her to handle. :/ You have to look at both points of view, but only one really comes out just a little higher than the other on the reality scale. No matter how you see it, someone has to be right and wrong in this situation. Whom that may be is beyond me, but listing the facts can make it more clear.

      I love discussions! XD

  25. Tonks says:


    Wait for it…




    *tears explanation stickers apart*

    I shouldn’t have ripped those stickers… I have a feeling Jed will say something. >.>

      • Tonks says:

        I don’t know… But I can sense it… He’s going to go like *BAM* and disagree with me, or not get it. XD

        Sorry, I’m in a weird mood right now.

        I want to attack somebody like a ninja at the second. ^-^

      • Spongey says:

        XD I get in those moods myself. It’s usually when I have an off day :/ Like yesterday x_x Ha ha well he doesn’t like Jeremy. Everyone has their opinions! ๐Ÿ™‚ I welcome them ๐Ÿ˜‰

      • Tonks says:

        ^-^ I welcome opinions too…

        Whatever Jed says, or, types…

        Jeremy will always be soft chocolate, though he used to be dark, stale chocolate. ๐Ÿ˜€

      • Tonks says:

        Of course, people are still gonna say Jeremy’s a jerk… An asshole… Da durrrrr.


      • Spongey says:

        SWEET! ๐Ÿ˜€ Have fun ๐Ÿ˜‰

      • Tonks says:

        I’m still filling mah town with fuglies. ^-^

      • Spongey says:

        Is that right? xD If I did that, they would actually breed So I think I’m good for now ;P
        I need to start getting pictures for a new terrey chapter. Well, more pictures that is. I already have half, just need some moar ;D

      • Tonks says:

        YAY! New Terrey chapter, but may not be first to comment. D:

        It means so much for me to be first somehow, probably because I feel more speshul that way. ๐Ÿ˜€

        There is a plastic skeleton staring at me. o_o

      • Spongey says:

        ๐Ÿ™‚ Yea It makes me feel special too XD I love being first, cause I never usually am. I love it when people fight over first in my story. Cracks me up!! XD

        Lol what the hell? Why is there a skeleton staring at you!? XD

      • Tonks says:

        Halloween decorations, plus my “dad” thinks that this will scare the boys away from our house, and my bedroom. O_o

        And not because of what you think. There’s some sort of treasured item my dad hid in my closet, and he wants to keep guys away from it.


      • Spongey says:

        XD ha ha ha. A plastic skeleton is going to scare boys away? Where can I get one?! xD

      • Jedidiah says:

        LOL about Tonk’s dad. Just LOL. ๐Ÿ˜€

      • Spongey says:

        I know I laughed too XD It really made my day XD

      • Jedidiah says:

        BTW you can get your …bound fix on. ๐Ÿ˜€

      • Spongey says:

        I KNOWZ!! ๐Ÿ˜€ I saw it! I saw it! ๐Ÿ˜€ Lol xD I’m going to read it later โค ๐Ÿ™‚ I has stuff to do ._.

      • Jedidiah says:

        Sorry… XD
        I get so bouncy when I have finished a chapter… I feel like I can sleep now for weeks. LOL

      • Spongey says:

        Oh my god you too? I get so bouncy and eager to have everyone read it! xD I’m so alert, and when I see comments my stomach like flips around cause I don’t want it to be bad comments x_x

        Ha ha xD. No worries Jed ๐Ÿ™‚ I’ll read it :D<3 (Lol of course I will xD I beg you for new chapters)

      • Tonks says:

        You can probably get one of those plastic skeletons at Party City, but that place is creepy, even without the Halloween decorations.

        The cashiers speak in a really weird voice. O_O

      • Spongey says:

        Oh I know what party city is ๐Ÿ™‚ I use to get my halloween costumes from there XD

      • Tonks says:

        Ah. I just pass out candy now in a t-shirt and sweat pants. Last year I got mobbed. So many kids were going, “GIMME CANDY! NOW!” One kid even flipped me off! No joke.

        I literally sobbed when Seasons arrived.

        But now, it’s time to search and see if I can get Apartment Life for Mac. ๐Ÿ˜•

      • Spongey says:

        Good luck finding it! ๐Ÿ™‚ Ha ha little kids can be harsh. I don’t give out candy, but my brothers want too. They want to dress up in a creepy outfit, sit on a chair with the bowl in their lap, and just… wait. Wait for kids to come and take candy, then scare the crap out of them XD Ahhh those poor unexpected children.

      • Tonks says:

        I would rather dress up my sims in costumes than pass out costumes. -.-

        Your brothers wouldn’t be very smart doing that, trust me, five year olds ARE ninjas. Those little spawns could beat the CRAP out of your brothers. XD But I’m being serious, so many little kids have kicked my ass in the past few years for trying to creep them out. D:

      • Spongey says:

        Lol my brothers are 5″9 and 6″2 I’m sure a 5 year old would crap themselves. Plus it would be dark out too XD God I’m so watching that from the window. Going to be so funny.

      • Tonks says:

        OH MY GOD

        My sims get so freaking depressed when it starts raining.

        But one of my sims was so amazed. ๐Ÿ˜€

      • Spongey says:

        I miss seasons ;_; I hope its the next EP!! I want RAIN! It fits with my legacy!!! XD

      • Tonks says:

        EA has stated that the next EP will NOT be Seasons. They did not reveal what the new EP will be, which is sucky… :/

        Seasons is sooo amazing, and I aged up my meanie child to teen and she got acne. She has to put on acne cream every morning. There’s no way to avoid it, if I do, she’ll get more acne. -.-

        + A penguin just walked up one snowy morning, and talked to the snowman the meanie’s mother built, and then he pissed himself. -.- God. Is that normal?

      • Spongey says:

        WHAT?! When did they say that! D: I really want Seasons!!! Now I’m going to have to waste more money on another EP before that one comes XD I want to get seasons before I’m 19, for gods sake! xD They release two EP’s a year…. not enough… if you ask me xD

        I know it is ๐Ÿ™‚ I really love Seasons. Ha ha, I don’t know why I don’t remember Acne! What EP do you have?

        Lol yea it’s normal. Happened to me when I had seasons. If you look up Sims 2 Seasons gameplay, my video pops up first. Even though the one under it has 50k and mine has 9k lol XD It’s so old. I was such a noob then.

      • Jedidiah says:

        Seasons would be an EP I’d get.

      • Spongey says:

        Totally. And it would be my favorite! ๐Ÿ™‚ God I miss Seasons. I. NEED. RAIN. โค O_O

      • Tonks says:

        I don’t know when they stated that, but when I participated in the Hidden Springs Giveaway on youtube somebody told me that Seasons wouldn’t be the next EP, and she/he had known that because EA said it somewhere (I don’t remember where she said).

        All i have installed right now is Seasons, and nothing else!

        But, there’s an easy way to get the acne for your teens (on TS2, of course it doesn’t work on TS3. .-.):
        Have the boolprop testingcheatsenabled true enabled, then shift-click on your teen.
        Somewhere in the options it has *Toggle Zits
        And if your teen has acne, the acne goes away, but if your teen doesn’t have acne, it gives them nasty, large pimples and zits.

        But, you have to have at least one EP for the *Toggle Zits to appear. It can be any EP.

        Pissy Penguin is what I’m going to call the stupid penguin. -.-

      • Spongey says:

        Oh okay. Well I hope it’s a good one! I can’t think of anymore EP’s that they could be releasing! Hmm… you know? All of a sudden it seems like I remember it now! I guess it’s just been so long, that I forgot. xD

        Lmao. Pissy Penguin xD

      • Tonks says:

        I think the new EP for TS3 could be a Makin’ Magic.
        + I couldn’t find a Mac version of Apartment Life. ๐Ÿ˜ฆ

        Pissy Penguin arrived at Mr. McGreggor’s house and booed him. D:

      • Spongey says:

        Ha ha xD That’s funny. Makin’ Magic? What in the world is that? O_o

      • Tonks says:

        The Sims 1, Makin’ Magic was one EP.

        In Apartment Life, there were witches and magic too, so I’m assuming EA may revive it.

        As silly as it sounds. ๐Ÿ˜›

      • Spongey says:

        Ohhhh. I never had those EP’s so I never knew there was magic. xD I knew about the witches though. EA really needs to add more monsters! D: I miss them just as much as I miss seasons!

      • Tonks says:

        I always loved the monsters, they were so awesome! Like, in University, there was a new monster- I can’t remember what monster-or creature it was. ๐Ÿ˜•

        I always liked Open For Business more than Ambitions, ’cause in Open For Business you could open a pet store, video game store, and tons of other things!

      • Spongey says:

        Yea me too! ๐Ÿ˜€ University had zombies!! One of my favorites XD I like Ambitions cause I dont have to run a store. I’m the total opposite of you xD I like doing other jobs, like firefighting! ๐Ÿ˜€

      • Tonks says:

        Firefighting was so hard for me, because I had a vampire sim named Harry who was at the top of a career, and one time an earthquake happened, and his child nearly died. .-.

        I loved opening up stores, ’cause I like to hear the “CHA-CHING! KA-CHING! BA-BING!” And plus I just found it awesome. ^-^

      • Spongey says:

        Ha ha yea. Espically when you hired people ๐Ÿ™‚ That was fun to see what kind of sims came on your lot. I have NEVER gotten to the end of that career yet. It’s sad, I know xD I’m trying to get Rhythm to the end of Ghost hunting. He’s SO close. I think he’s level 7. ๐Ÿ˜€ I’m proud of myself!

      • Tonks says:

        I got my sim to the top in three minutes (three sim hours) I don’t know how the hell I did it, all I remember was *ZOOOM* he had some sort of power work out and got to the top.

        The ghost hunting career was hard to get at the top to, but Harry’s wife (Morgan Hemlock’s daughter, Belisama) managed in a MONTH. *groan* That was the hardest point. ๐Ÿ˜•

      • Spongey says:

        Yea it’s such a tough career. I remember having this one sim live right across the street from the firefighter stantion, yet still took the truck to work! XD It was like 5 feet away! I laughed every time he came and went from work. It made no sense, cause they were so close in distance! Talk about bad for the enviroment! xP

    • Jedidiah says:

      So fittingly to your legacy title, too.
      But a change of weather would be great!

      • Spongey says:

        I know isn’t it? I just want rain because I love it ๐Ÿ™‚ My friends call me strange because I prefer rain. You never really hear that do you? xD
        Yeesss it would. I’d kill for a freaking tornado or something right about now. I just want a change from the sun all the time ._.

      • Jedidiah says:

        I like the rain when I’m inside. XD I like snow then, too. Ohh, snow, Christmas, eggnogg, pumpkin spice hot chocolate!
        But for them Sims…it’s time for a change. Curious that no NPC hasn’t gone looney from all the sun yet.

      • Spongey says:

        I love it in and out ๐Ÿ˜€ Me and my bestie would run around in it when we were little. Ah, good times<3 EEEPPP! I KNOW! Christmas is my favorite time of year! The lights, the decorations, the Christmas music!! Everything about it makes me feel so happy!! ๐Ÿ˜€

        LOL! I know right. If I was them, I would have gone nuts. I need change! xD

      • Tonks says:

        The other good thing about the Seasons EP is that when you’re done from building a snowman, or having a snowball fight, you go back inside and change into your PJs, then you can have hot chocolate. (Which, is rather realistic, right? Tons of people do that!)

      • Spongey says:

        I know I do that! Get in my warm pjs, and snuggle up with a blanket and something warm to drink. God I love winter. โค

      • Jedidiah says:

        I don’t even have to have a snowman built in order to change into my jammies and have a cup of cocoa! ahaha…:)
        btw Tonks did you re-read yet ๐Ÿ˜‰

      • Spongey says:

        Ha ha me either Jed! Just as long as it’s cold out, gives me enough of an excuse ๐Ÿ™‚

      • Tonks says:

        I haven’t re-read yet, I’m a bit busy at the second, but I’ll definitely re-read as soon as I can…

      • Spongey says:

        You gotta read it when your free. It’s awesome! ๐Ÿ˜€

      • Tonks says:

        I read it.


        I hate Shirley. She annoys me and she’s… Annoying. D:


        Cannot wait for next chapter. *squeals*

        + Splintered Sun keeps getting lost in my email… Does it have a new chapter up?

      • Spongey says:

        If it did I would be the first one to know! I always stay updated with Emy’s stories!! I’d be dumb not too.
        Yea it was awesome! Aw why? What’s wrong with her? She was under a spell! She couldn’t do anything! She’s a sweet girl ๐Ÿ˜ฆ Who isn’t going to know her love or baby any longer…

      • Tonks says:

        I love Winter too. Even though it barely snows in AZ, it’s still cold and sleepy. I always love the hot cocoa. ๐Ÿ˜€

      • Spongey says:

        Snow is all we ever get. Last year was like the most on record I believe( for where I live). I think we got like 6 or 8 feet of SNOW. It was up to my KNEES ._. So cold. Lol xD

      • Tonks says:

        I just never liked Shirley… Like said in the most recent chapter, “For Shirley meeting a true Mage was exciting, for about two evenings. Then it became an old shoe.” that’s what I disliked most about her, but I also disliked how she cared more about herself then Marcus when Liam told her she could die in the first two months of pregnancy. I mean, I just… I’d care more about my own child surviving than me dying! It’s just my opinion… And I never found her sweet. ๐Ÿ˜ฆ

      • Spongey says:

        Well she was just scared :/ It’s not like she knew who her baby was yet. She could barely feel him living in inside of her at that point. Being afraid caused her to act that way. Well maybe it was exiciting for her at first, then she got used to him ๐Ÿ™‚ Cause she loved him ๐Ÿ™‚

        Of course, we all have our opinions :)<3

      • Jedidiah says:

        Shirley does have the coward trait. ๐Ÿ˜‰ As for that quote, Tonks, it just refers to her acceptance of Liam being different. Because Riverview isn’t a big town, having a supernatural being like a Mage live there is a big thing. But the more she got to know him, she realized he wasn’t much different. And as for her not caring about her baby during the early stages of pregnancy, she did care of course. It was just a heavy drop of information. She assumed that she would have a normal pregnancy, not one that could potentially result in the death of both her and the child. And if you were referring to her yelling at Liam about dying, she was just shocked that Liam would “simply” forget such vital information. It’s like sleeping with a girl and later on say, oh hey I have an STD”. That kind of brings out some reaction. NOT THAT I’VE EVER DONE THAT!
        But Tonke, you have the right to dislike a character or not. ๐Ÿ™‚ Thanks for reading and commenting. ๐Ÿ˜€

      • Spongey says:

        Hey! I pay attention good to your story! ;D I pointed out a lot of key points you did, before I even read your comment! You of course added more because it’s your story! xP She was just scared, not that she didn’t care. I agree totally to that, and I also said that she just accepted him cause she loved him ๐Ÿ™‚ That’s such a good example Jed! ๐Ÿ™‚ It fits perfectly to how she reacted. It was just Liam forgot to add such delicate information that caused her to freak out. She was scared for herself, and her for her baby. ๐Ÿ˜ฆ

        I said that too! XD I said everyone has an opinion. Ha ha ๐Ÿ™‚

      • Jedidiah says:

        *broad applause for Spongey* ๐Ÿ™‚
        I was debating if I should post my comment here. But since Tonks did, I thought i made sense to answer here. ๐Ÿ˜‰ Your comment section tends to end with a lively discussion. ๐Ÿ˜€

      • Spongey says:

        Thank you, thank you ๐Ÿ˜‰ It’s fine, you can discuss ๐Ÿ˜€ I love discusses anyways ๐Ÿ™‚

        Doesn’t?! My blog is always holding conversations!! XD

  26. tessrobbs23 says:

    Can NOT WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  27. peyton224 says:

    okay on a crazy side note,i love winter too!!! One reason,i was born in winter! DECEMBER 24TH,CHRISTMAS EVE BABY! (My mom fell down when she was pregnant with me ๐Ÿ˜ฆ Stupid ice on the steps….)

    • Spongey says:

      Aww ๐Ÿ˜ฆ Well at least your okay ๐Ÿ˜€ โค Oh really? I know someone who was born on december 24th as well! She's going to be 13 ๐Ÿ™‚ I love where my birthday is. November 18th. Right before christmas, but not too close to Christmas ๐Ÿ˜‰ So I get gifts a month apart from each other! ;D

      • peyton224 says:

        My boyfriend was born on November 26th,close to Thanksgiving ๐Ÿ™‚
        Oh im not okay! I stalk…..people. My mom lovez me cuz she’s just as random as mee!!
        Somethimes,On meh b-day,i get early christmas presents,AND birthday presents! I love December 24/25th!!!

      • Spongey says:

        Ha ha yea ๐Ÿ™‚ I can’t wait for Christmas. I just can’t believe I’m going to be 18! o.o It’s so strange. Then I’l graduate, and then… no more school… I don’t know how I’ll manage ;P Well no school for a little bit, then I’m going to college ๐Ÿ˜€ Study something in Science. Probably going to be a Sonograph tech. The classes look pretty tough. XD

        Isn’t November 25th black Friday? >:) Lush Black Friday.

      • Jedidiah says:

        You going to be 18 on Nov 18? Cool!
        I can’t believe I’m already seeing Christmas decorations in the store and we don’t even have Halloween yet!

        Oh and sorry for butting here. ^_^’

      • Spongey says:

        Ha ha yup~! 18 on the 18th! ๐Ÿ˜€ I’m supa happy. I love that my birthday is near Black Friday. Cheap discounts= PRESENTS ๐Ÿ˜€

        I know! I said that to my brother when I was in Lowes the other day. He said “God look at the back wall! It’s covered in Christmas!” I was like “I know! I guess Lowes just skipped Halloween altogether!” Then my dad was messing around with this giant inflateable santa, telling my brother to go sit on it’s lap and tell santa what he wants for Christmas XD I was laughing so hard, and then called my dead a ‘Tard xP

        Ahhhhh The holidays<3 No problem Jed! Butt right in xD โค

  28. Callie says:

    D’aww, I have a feeling Micki and Shadow are going to get along very well indeed ^_^
    Here’s the thing with Jeremy – his experiences in life have left him emotionally and mentally scarred. Possibly forever, I don’t know. But either way, he refuses to believe that he is abnormal. Who would? I feel sorry for him, because in his mind he clearly believes he is much more sane than he reallly is. What he needs is some serious help; someone to clean him up, explain why he is different. Maybe one day he’ll become worthy of Micki, or someone like her. But right now? Something is seriously wrong with him, and he needs to sort himself out before he can even begin to think about leading a normal life.
    Still, I hate how he badmouthed her family. Homophobia is something that I really HATE. I can’t understand why you would use someone’s sexuality as a way of hating or isolating them, I can’t. So WHAT if Fraser and Scott are “faggot parents”? I’m pretty sure being a rapist is considerably worse than being gay -.-
    Sooo excited for you to start them up in Appaloosa Plains! I love that neighbourhood, it’s my favourite of the expansion packs^^ (Sunset Valley will always be my ultimate favourite though)โ™ฅ

    • Spongey says:

      Yea, I think they will too ^_^ Even though Shadow is a fiesty little girl!

      I agree with you totally. Jeremy really does need a lot of mental help, because honestly? He’s not fit for Micki right now, if she ever decides to let him back in! Right now she just doesn’t want to deal with any man. She’s tired. Like literally, TIRED. She just wants to give up most of the time because of everything she has been through in such a short amount of time. It’s hard. It really is.

      Callie, I feel the SAME way. I put that in for story purposes, but I don’t feel that way at all! Gay’s are just like everyone else, they just prefer the same sex! There is nothing wrong with them. ๐Ÿ™‚ You got that right! Being a rapist is a CRIME, being gay is just… who you are. I love Appaloosa plains!! It’s so amazing! ๐Ÿ˜€ So big, and full of oppurtunities. Yea Sunset is where we all started<3 So it places a warm spot in my hear too :3


  29. Tonks says:

    Can someone say “Good morning” to meh please? D:
    I just woke up. .-.

    • Spongey says:

      Wow really?! O_O Good morning though! XD Or… Evening… it’s almost 10:00 pm here XD

      • Tonks says:

        It’s around 6 PM where I am.

        Today I had a lazy day and never really got out of bed. XD

      • Spongey says:

        Ha ha, I’ve had one of two of those before. I can’t do it often cause I go crazy just laying in bed all day @_@ I have to move or go outside.

      • Tonks says:

        I don’t always have lazy days, but usually it’s around 6 times a month I have lazy days.

      • Spongey says:

        Ha ha I was gonna say!! xD

      • Tonks says:

        XD If it were six times a month, I would’ve had much more insults thrown at me by my sister, and for a good reason!

      • Spongey says:

        Lmao, you got that right! I laughed when I read 6 times a month xD I was like… wow… okay then XD

      • Tonks says:

        I would feel bad for anyone who has lazy days six times a month. That’s just sad. D:

      • Spongey says:

        Yea it is! I barely ever have days like that. The only time I might have a lot of days in bed is if I’m sick. That’s it!

      • Tonks says:

        Yeah. I said six times a year ’cause I used to get sick a lot.
        Even six times a year isa lot for lazy days. .-.

      • Spongey says:

        Yea but lazy days, and sick days are totally different things ๐Ÿ˜‰ You can’t help it when your sick, but you can when your acting like a bum! XD

      • Tonks says:


        Plus, I can’t blame myself, I’m still a bit depressed- My mum said she found a school that only had 48 students in it- But she didn’t read the part where it said it was K-8 only. ๐Ÿ˜•

      • Spongey says:

        Aw that stinks :/ Is that you don’t want to go to school because of what happened? Have you ever considered an online school? That’s what I’ve been doing since 6th grade, and I love it ๐Ÿ™‚

      • Tonks says:

        I did think about online school, but I really sort of want to keep myself in school and not locked at home. I just need to find better teacher, and see if guys really aren’t jerk faces. :/

      • Spongey says:

        Yea your right :/ I wish I could attend school… but the schools here are too bad, and my mom gets scared for us :/ Plus I’m in 12th grade now XD It’s my last year. Ha ha

        New chapter ๐Ÿ˜€

      • Jedidiah says:

        I have one lazy phase a day… does that count? That’s when I usually am in need of a coffee stat…or a nap.

        Tonks, I think it is good that you weighing your options, regular school, online school, etc. I think Spongey said it before, stay in school is best in the long run. Of course, there will always be that tyrannical teacher that drinks sour milk every morning, that group of girls that think they whole universe revolves around their hair, that idiot guy that makes your life miserable. Unfortunately, you will find those types of people also in the work place.

        I don’t know you personally or your situation, so I’m not going to say, oh I understand what you’re going through blablabla… I guess, what I am trying to say is this: there are guys out there who aren’t as you put it jerk faces. They are hard to come by, there are there. Even in school.

        Hang in there.

      • Spongey says:

        Aw Jed that was really sweet ๐Ÿ™‚ โค Couldn't have said it better myself! Your always going to come across jerks, but never let them get you down ๐Ÿ™‚ Just keep pushing.

        Lazy phase… hmm… if it doesn't last all day, then your not consider being lazy for the day ๐Ÿ˜‰ You should be glad though. No one wants to be called lazy xP I heard yah on the naps. Even though I'm still 5 years old and fight mine XD "Must… stay… awake… to… play… sims…." ;P

      • Spongey says:

        OH! And don’t think I didn’t notice a new Huckleberry!! ;D โค I was just writing out my new chapter so I couldn't read it yet ;P

      • Tonks says:

        I know those groups of girls at work, trust me, those witches have been tackling me ever since I stole a stupid Barbie doll from them in kindergarten. :/

        I’ll be back in school sometime, hopefully very, very soon… Before 2012.

      • Jedidiah says:

        Way to go, Tonks

        And Spongey, I wasn’t saying anything. I wasn’t saying anything. XD

      • Spongey says:

        YEA but you know I’ll find it! >:D I never lose track of my Huckle-Bounds!! No sir!! ๐Ÿ˜‰ Admit it, you wanted to though ;P โค

      • Tonks says:

        I must say, I was a kick-butt kiddo. ๐Ÿ˜›

      • Jedidiah says:

        I was tempted to, yes. ๐Ÿ˜€

      • Spongey says:

        SEE? ๐Ÿ˜‰ I knew you were. I beat you to it! ๐Ÿ˜€ Ha ha!! โค

  30. Tonks says:

    *year, not month. O_o

  31. marissa3 says:

    I finally read it!!! I’m actually glad I was sick and had to wait to read this because now I can rush onto the next chapter! I love Micki, for a second I was disappointed in her, going with Jeremy and such but pushing him away just made me love her again. She could never be with him after what he did, hopefully he’s out of the picture for good now.
    And Scott’s speach to her was so CUTE!!! and so true, Micki is a princess, although maybe more a princess of darkness ๐Ÿ˜‰
    Shadow seems cute too, pet’s has totally fried my game, all the furniture has slipped off the tables and such and fell beneath it…. if I try and delete anything my game crashes! I can still play normally otherwise, right now I’m messing around with Oliver’s daughter Constance making her a master horse rider – I think a little break from the real Belgravia’s is in order and some good old fashioned fun simming is needed ๐Ÿ˜€

    Lovely house too!!

    • Spongey says:

      Glad you enjoyed it!! ๐Ÿ™‚ I know I like that when I’m trying to catch up too. I can just skip ahead and not have to wait to see what happens XD. Of course she couldn’t go with him ๐Ÿ˜ฆ He hurt her badly, and shouldn’t be kept around. Well, Scott is a good Pa pa to her ๐Ÿ™‚ She needed to hear that from him. How she takes it, is up to her now.

      I hear you on that one. I needed to play normally too. Sometimes just messing around is all you really need ^_^ โค Oh and the CC is broken because of the patch. It sucks. lol.


  32. huffletuff says:

    Working on getting caught up, it’s been a while.
    Mackenzie’s story has been my favorite out of anyone’s so far, it’s fantastic!
    I can’t help but feel a little bad for Jeremy though (I know everyone probably hates me now).
    Micki pretty much just said that she loved him and then took it back. She said that he need some help when she obviously has quite a few issues of her own. Though, it is good that they’re not together right now, they’re both very immature and need to grow up a little. But hopefully, Jeremy will clean himself up a little and at least make another appearence.
    I’m so excited to keep reading, only twelve more chapters until i’m caught up!

    • Spongey says:

      Oh wow, it has been awhile =) Well, I’m glad you like it! No worries, a lot of people felt bad for Jeremy… in the beginning.
      You shall see what happens ๐Ÿ˜‰ hehehe

      Have fun! ๐Ÿ˜€

  33. ddlieber says:

    foal not foul… i see lots of typos b/c i read better & faster than most people. i started reading this legacy like last week. not 2 b rude

  34. Ermannith says:

    Oh, I almost forgot to ask! X( do you remember where you got Makenzie’s hair from? I’d love to have it! ๐Ÿ˜€

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