Chapter 5.13 – Through The Struggles…

Both were loved, cherished, and held dear to our hearts. We lay to rest, Scottie Terrey and his husband; Fraser Terrey. Gone but not forgotten.

Makenzie’s Point of View

Every tear shed, every painful feeling that coursed its way through my body- Could never cover up the intense inflictions that strike me every second. Not only losing one great man, but two. My dad died from regret, going to sleep one night, to never again wake up.

Placing flowers at their graves, Kim sighed “You will never know how much we will all miss you.”

The more I let the reality of it sink in, the more I cried. If it wasn’t for my husband, I think I would have lost it ages ago. Not only did I lose my fathers, but I had to get the news of the second one passing while in recovery at the hospital. My poor baby- No, my poor babies. That very night I was rushed to the ER to have an emergency C-section performed. It was only luck linguring near my side, that my children made it through alive. That I made it through… alive.

Grasping me, he whispered, “It’s okay. Everything is going to be okay.”

Yeah, like that is even close to the truth. How is everything ‘okay’? My parents are dead, and my twins nearly died themselves… Nothing is okay.

What makes things seem even worse, is that I didn’t even get to attend the actual viewing and funeral. No, this is just an attempt of my family trying to recreate the event. I was bed ridden in the hospital when the funeral happened. Why couldn’t my sisters wait? Why did they have to do it without me? It just made the death of my parents hurt even more. The pain is like tiny daggers piercing through my heart. I wish the pain would stop… why won’t it stop??

“Aunt Kimmy? What does it mean to die?”

She exhaled, gently resting her hand on his shoulder, “Noah, I don’t think you’re ready for-“

“No. Tell him.” I choked out “He deserves to know. He’s old enough.”

“Mommy?” then looking up at Kim, he asked “Kimmy?”

“Noah, you remember when you found that baby bird? And you were sad because it wouldn’t move, or chirp anymore? That’s what someone dying is like. They can no longer move or understand things.”

Looking over my shoulder, I could see the horror in Noah’s eyes. I felt like a selfish jerk for making him endure that. He needed to know the truth though. People die, because life is a jerk.

Noah moved his feet quickly, darting towards his father. He swung his arms around him, and held on tightly. Fear was embedded onto his face, and small tears inched down his cheeks. I don’t feel like a jerk anymore, I am one…

“P-please don’t ever die daddy.” he whimpered, clenching tighter.

Jed glanced up at me, remorse in his eyes. He blamed me of course, but heck, it was my fault.

Jed unlatched Noah from his side, and picked him up into his arms. I just stood by and watched as he tried to calm down our 7 year old. That should be me holding him, and telling him the world revolves around happiness. I can’t lie though. Not to him.

“Noah, daddy is not going anywhere. No one is going to leave you, okay?”

Noah shook his little head up and down, then nestled his head on Jed’s shoulder.

“Come on, let’s take you home. Let mommy and Kim have some time alone.”

I watched as he carried Noah all the way to the car. Then I watched as the car drove down the road, until it was no longer in my view. Kim crept up behind me, just staining the side of my head with her glares.

“Why did you make me do that? You put me on the spot. I know you’re hurting, but that was cruel Makenzie.”

I winched in pain, by the sharp points of her words. She was right, it was cruel.

I can’t even believe I would go to such lengths to hurt my son. Just because I am feeling a heavy guilt, and disbelief… and he isn’t. I broke down in Kim’s arms, I just couldn’t hold in the pain any longer. It was ripping me apart.

“I’m SORRY!!” My cries heard aloud “I’m just- It’s so painful! I miss them so much…”

She patted my back reassuringly, sighing as I sobbed onto her dress.

“Oh, Makenzie… it’s okay. Just let it all out.”

***

Jed’s Point of View

What a night. Spending hours trying to calm down my wife, only for her to cause Noah to be scared out of his mind! I know she’s in a lot of pain, but, she needs to realize anger isn’t going to bring them back. Neither is causing her son to go through an emotional trauma.

Walking through the door, I nearly wanted to lose my head! The babysitter still had the toddlers out of bed, and I could hear one of the twins screaming! I paid her to watch them, not let them scream and destroy the house! I mean, poor Phea, she gave me this look like ‘SAVE ME!’

I quickly dismissed the sitter, paying her, then wishing her a ‘good night’, through my gritted teeth.

After making sure Luke and Phea were okay, I hurried in to each room to check on the twins. They were so small, and it scared me to even leave them for an hour. Luckily though, Phoenix was only just making noises, and wriggling around. While, Qiana (Key-Anna) just wanted to be held.

Who would have thought that entire time Micki was pregnant, she was actually pregnant with two? Bang goes my plan for only raising three kids. Honestly though, I love Nix and Ana. And I’m just so thankful for them to be alive.

***

Kim’s Point of View

Months passed all of us by in this upsetting battle. Everyone just couldn’t seem to move on with their lives, knowing Makenzie was so heart broken. I’ve seen her down on her luck plenty of times as kids, but I never seen her this bad. She can’t even talk to someone without it ending with tears streaming down her cheeks.

Try as I may, she just never wanted to listen to reason. It’s like she wanted to hurt, and feel pain. She never let any of us help her either. She wanted to fight this alone. She always wanted to be alone!

“Hey, Mick. I know you don’t want to hear this, but, if you keep torturing yourself like this you’re never going to get any better. Please, can’t you just let Jed and I help you through this? For your children’s sake at least??”

She scowled, “How many times do I have to tell you to leave me alone? I don’t want anyone’s help.”

“Please Micki?” I begged “We can talk you through this. It’s not good to keep your anger and frustration bottled up. It’s hurting you, and the people around you! We love you Micki, please, just listen to reason.”

“I don’t want to hear it!” she stood up abruptly “I’m taking shadow out…”

 That’s all she did anymore was take shadow out. It was either that, or she locked herself in her room until the crack of dawn. Even then, she’d still stay in there. She was always ignoring her kids, and even her husband! No one could break down that cement wall she built up. No one… 

I chased after her, grabbing her by the arm. “What good is it to ignore your own family?! To stay in that room night and day, forgetting about the people who love you!!”

“Don’t touch me.” she hissed “I said, I’m going out…”

“Your parents would be so unhappy with you Makenzie…”

I hit a nerve when I came off saying that. I knew it was a bit much, but she needed to hear it. If Fraser and Scott were still alive, they would not be happy with Micki acting this way. She’s turned so bitter…

“Don’t you freaking talk about my parents!! You little mooch, just get out of my house!!”

I’ll admit, that really hurt. I didn’t think to retaliate though. She was clearly upset, so I just let her go. What more could I do?

***

Jed’s Point of View

Though Kim and I tried, Micki built up her wall again. When she did, there was no telling when we would be able to get through it. When she was in this state of mind, it didn’t matter to her what she said or who she hurt. She just couldn’t stand the fact that everyone was trying to move on, and she was still hurting so much.

It didn’t help anyone’s moods either. Ophelia and Luke were constantly getting into things, the twins were always screaming, and Noah was in a funk. He was just as sour as his mother. I couldn’t make that kid crack a smile for nothing. He would just come home from school, literally throw his book bag across the room and take off to his room- which he hated sharing with Luke and Nix.

So I got it in my head, that TODAY was the final straw. I was going to make this household happy again, even if it killed me. I started with Noah, because I knew a kid would be easier to crack. All I had to do was make one small stop at the pet store, and my troubles with Noah would be over.

At least, I’d like to think so.

I didn’t have that kitten in the house 5 seconds and Phea already was trying to grab him. That poor kitten was squirming and struggling to be free of her clutches. I wanted to help, but I was afraid if I grabbed the cat one of them would get hurt!

Eventually the kitten freed himself, and took off across the living room. I can see this is going to be a problem already…

“KITTY!!!”

“Mew?

Being the smart dad that I am, I took and hid the Kitten away in my room until Noah came home from school. If Phea got a hold of him once, she could do it again. Also, who says Luke won’t grab at him either?! I hope Noah can protect his poor kitten, because I sure can’t.

The moment Noah came home from school, I told him to wait in the dining room until I brought out his present. Of course being a kid, his ears perked up and he waited eagerly for me to bring it out. Once he saw the tiny creature in my hand, he exploded with joy and snatched the kitten from my hands!! Well… guess that means he likes his gift.

“Oh, Daddy!! He’s perfect!! Thank you, thank you, thank you!!”

I just left him to it. Walking past him with a grin on my face, and smugness about myself- I felt good. I brought someone happiness, and I liked it.

“Oh, I’m gonna call you Snoopy!! You like that name? Huh, Snoopy?”

Snoopy? Well, it’s his cat… Besides, this self-satisfaction gave me that kick I needed to head to my next target.

“Hey, Snoopy? Can you keep a secret?”

I headed towards my bedroom, and just like everyday, Micki was curled up on top of the bed crying. She would constantly torture herself with pictures of her parents, and past memories of them together. Not good ones either, she’d only bring up the bad. She blamed herself for them both dying. Though everyone knows, no one could have prevented their deaths. Deep down, I know she knows that… but she just doesn’t know how to accept it.

“Makenzie?”

Nothing but silence. Yet another ‘non’ surprise. She always ignores me.

Sighing, I tried again, “Makenzie, I know you can hear me. Don’t ignore me.”

MORE silence.

“MAKENZIE!”

She groaned, then propped herself up. She didn’t even look at me, she just kept her focus on shadow running around the yard. Why did she have to treat everyone with such hate? We did nothing but love her. I’m sorry, I can’t take this anymore. If she doesn’t talk to me, I’m going to MAKE her talk.

“What do you want?”

What do I want? What kind of greeting is that?!

“Oh, I don’t know… a new car, a Starbucks coffee… Oh, and maybe my WIFE BACK?!”

She scoffed, her focus still out the window, “I never left, smart-alec.”

OKAY! That’s IT!

“Alright, that’s it… you’re coming with me! We’re going for a drive!”

She looked up at me, and before she knew it I picked her up from the bed and placed her on top of my shoulder. I was through playing games, I’m going to take her somewhere and wait until she talks with me. I can’t deal with this anymore!

“JEDIDIAH!!! YOU JERK! Put me down right now! I swear to god, I’ll scream!!

So what, I hope she does scream. Then people can see how childish she’s acting.

“Go ahead. I’m not putting you down.”

JED!!!

***

It took me about an hour of driving around, but she finally cooled down. She even accepted to what ever I wanted to do. Anything, she said, for me to stop bothering her. So, I took her to the one spot I knew we cherished the most- Our proposal spot.

We sat in the grass, just staring up into the sky. For the longest time, neither of us muttered a word. I was waiting for her to say something, and she… she just didn’t want to talk to me at all.

I guess it was up to me to break the silence.

“Beautiful night, eh?”

I seriously couldn’t think of anything else…

She turned to face me, a smile beginning to form, she said “You’re so stupid sometimes. You did all of that to bring me here, and now you can’t even think of anything to tell me.”

I didn’t even care what she called me, I was just so mesmerized by her smile. I hadn’t seen that smile in what felt like an eternity. 

I smiled back. “I missed that.”

“What?”

“Your smile.”

She threw herself back, “It’s not easy to smile when your heart aches.”

Okay that’s enough to depress a clown… She really needs to stop beating herself up like this!

“Micki…” I sighed “You loved your parents so much, and you know they loved you. So why do you torture yourself? Blaming yourself for their deaths? Do you think they would like that their baby is hurting?”

Her eyes threatened tears, “No… but… I j-just can’t help it, Jed. I don’t know what else to do to make the guilt I feel go away. I just want to blame someone for them dying. I don’t want to accept that they just got old. It’s not fair! They’re my parents! They were suppose to live forever!”

I wiped away her stray tear, “But that’s life, Mick. People die everyday. You can’t blame yourself for that. You learn to adapt to it, and just remember the good times you shared together. Those memories are what help people who lost those close to them to press on.”

“Jed?”

“Yeah?”

“Do you think my parents are mad at me? For the way I’ve been treating everyone?”

I smiled at her, then pointed up towards the sky, “Look up there. You see those two twinkling stars?”

She nodded.

“That’s your parents letting you know how much they love and miss you. They could never be anything but proud of you, Makenzie.”

A smile grew across her face, “You really think that’s them?”

I nodded. “I know that’s them.”

After another moment she stood up.

“Jed, I know they’re looking down on me… but I wish they were next to me. How am I ever going to make it without them?”

I pulled her close, “Makenzie, they might be gone physically but you’ll always hold them close to you. Plus, you will always have me. I’m here for the long run, baby.”

She laughed at me, then sighed, “Let’s go home. I think I’m ready now.”

“If you believe you are…” I smiled, leading my arm out “Then right this way, miss.”

***

We arrived home 20 minutes later. Both of us were elated, and we even planned on having a little ‘alone’ time. It wasn’t until we pulled up in the front of house, and we saw Kim outside looking frantic, that our moods went south.

I climbed out of the driver seat, and shouted “What’s wrong?” from across the way.

“Okay, don’t panic! But Noah’s gone! I think he might have slipped out of the house when I wasn’t looking! I’m sorry! There is just so many kids!!

I shot a look over at Makenzie. She was completely emotionless, I had no idea what was going on inside her head. As for me? I felt like I was about to have a nervous break down! My son is missing!!

**

Here’s Qiana, and yes, her eyes are pink! Her traits are Artistic, and Heavy sleeper.

Here’s Phoenix! His traits are Slob and Athletic.

Thanks for reading! Uh-oh, Noah scurried off when Kim wasn’t looking! Let’s hope he doesn’t get himself into any trouble!! And yay for Jed helping Micki through her losses! She was really turning sour…

Authors note: You know what I realized? I’m taking care of FOUR toddlers! O.o God please help me…

About Jax

"My fake plants died because I did not pretend to water them." - Mitch Hedberg
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125 Responses to Chapter 5.13 – Through The Struggles…

  1. Brennon says:

    I must get first comment!!!! I Hope!

  2. sariechiny says:

    😀 OMG the twins are sooo cute!!!! ❤ Qiana is such a cute name, and I love the name Phoenix!
    AND Phoenix has Fray's hair color! Awww…if Micki was still down in the dumps, I'm sure she would never want to look at Nix…
    BUT, yay for Jed! That was so sweet what he did, taking her to that spot again, and telling her about her parents and the stars ❤
    RIP Scott and Fraser Terrey )':

    • Spongey says:

      Yeah, I thought he should do something special for her, because she was really hurting. Well, even though Nix has his hair, he doesn’t look anything like Fraser. He looks like… Jed, sorta. I don’t know, he has a mix of features about him. All the kids do.

      Thanks! I thought so too 🙂 It was SO hard trying to find the perfect name that started with Q ._. Yeah, Phoenix is a great name. Jed suggested it to me, and I really liked it. It was either going to be that or Parker.

      Yeah 😦 Rip ❤

      • Brennon says:

        Phoenix is way better than Parker (no offense to any Parker that may read this, but I don’t like your name.

      • Spongey says:

        I actually like the name Parker, but I’m glad I decided to go with Jed’s suggestion of Phoenix. It sounds better.

      • Brennon says:

        I was just being snotty for no reason. Weeeeee sunflowers and rainbows! Maybe I should take my medication, but I can’t walk cuz my legs won’t stop moving from side to side. O.o

      • sariechiny says:

        Haha, I don’t mind the name Parker(: Phoenix sounds a whole lot cooler though…
        I have a relative called Parker…not really sure what specifically to call him…my…Mom’s cousin’s son? Yea…his brother’s name is Preston, so there’s another P! 🙂

      • Spongey says:

        Yeah it does sound cooler :3 Aw that’s a neat name! I love the name Parker. I don’t even know anyone named Parker let alone have a relative named that. So if he’s your mom’s cousin, that would make him your second cousin, then if that second cousin had a child, it’s like, 3rd cousin or something like that.

      • sariechiny says:

        …alright, so i guess he’s my 3rd cousin.
        GAHH i just had 2 exams today and 1 everyday for the rest of this week! D: My brain’s kinda fried right now. Can’t really think.
        What’s 3 x 4 again? O_o

      • Spongey says:

        Lol 3×4 is 12. :3 I know what you mean @_@ My teachers keep giving me a crap load of work to do. It’s driving me nuts!

      • sariechiny says:

        I know. The work load drives me nuts too!
        Only 1 more week until Christmas break though!!! *woot woot* 😀

      • Spongey says:

        Same here. Like I have this huge exam I have to take on the Victorian Era… -.- Seriously? How is this helping me in life? Lol. But, at least your right about that! “Christmas, I am SO READY for you!!” ❤ Lol For me, I just want an upgrade for my laptop :3 Going from 3 GB of RAM to 8! 😀 I are happy about that.

        Plus I'm trying to get chapter 14 out, so I can work on the Christmas special!! It wouldn't make sense to do the special first, then the new chapter… since Noah is gone and all at the moment O.o Lol Like "Yeah, I'm just coming back to celebrate Christmas… then I'll go hide again." hehehe

      • sariechiny says:

        LOL yea, that would be funny(:
        hey guys! i’m back for christmas! 😀 ok, now i’m gonna go disappear again! XDXD
        Oooh yea(: Christmas, you have no idea how long I have been waiting for you…no idea(:

      • Spongey says:

        Yeah same here… I can’t wait for Christmas!

        Lol wouldn’t it?? XD Just wouldn’t make sense if I did that.

  3. Brennon says:

    No, not Fraser! I kinda teared up a little tbh. I get too attached to sims that aren’t even mine. It was just a shock. 😦 At least her babies lived. I did get happier when I saw the future hubby and wifey Ophelia and Luke. So, hopefully this will be the end of Micki’s depression stuff for at least the rest of her generation? Please, she can cry if Jed dies before her, but no other times. Maybe is Kaylee or Lia dies, but who knows if their characters will be around in the story even by then. I realized I sounded kinda bad only wanting to get the first comment, it’s just I have had sort of a streak going. It looks like I got first this time, so I think that’s 4 chapters in a row of first comment. Going for a record here. Pink hair is back in the family! I don’t care for Nix as a nicknamed for Phoenix though really, cuz Nix (Nyx) is a girl name right? It’s the name of a goddess, maybe it can work for a guy idk. I guess that’s the only nickname to get out of that though. you could just call him p..hehe. Oh, I’m so immature. Like when me and my sister started cracking up when my grandma asked me if she could have my sack. Ah, grandma’s house. You have to reach up a girls skirt to get a plastic bag. I do like the name Phoenix though, and Qiana is also a cool name. I have a good feeling about those too. I just have a feeling one of them will be heir. So, lastly before I stop typing this all, bring back Fraser would be a very good storyline.

    Gain again what they want to steal

    • Spongey says:

      Aw, well Fraser passed the same night that Scott did in my game 😦 So it was his way of saying it was his time to go too. I know, Fraser was a loveable sim, but all sims have their day to die =(. Ha ha, you too? Jaec and now you think that Phea and Luke will be together. When I think about it, it really is rather cute. But we shall see what happens. Aw, I know. It’s tough to be so emotional, and cry all the time. That’s why Jed put his foot down, and made Micki talk it out. He was so tired of her being so mean, and upset. She needed to let it all out.

      Whaaa? I LOVE the nickname Nix. I thought it fit a boy rather well, to be honest. It sounds manly enough, doesn’t it? I looked it up on babycenter.com and it said it’s a greek boy name, and it means Crimson. 🙂 So there we go ^.^

      Steal? Steal what? O.o *confused*

      • Brennon says:

        The picture of Luke and Phea at the wedding was so cute. It’s a good think Fraser really died, because if you had killed him, I would find you, find where you live, and then come hunt you down like a filthy animal! 🙂 Nix means Crimson….and Crimson is dead, after spending his last years in prison. Of course, the original Crimson is fine, but that’s a whole other story so it doesn’t count. Wait, that’s who Crimson is right? I suddenly don’t remember….Where am I? Why is there so much Lady Gaga on my ipod? Okay, deep breaths, deep breaths. Okay, anyways I always know it’s the name of the greek goddess, of some thing in the underworld, night or something maybe. Or maybe nyx is a god. Yeah, goddess of night. WIKIPEDIA PICTURE IS INAPPROPRIATE! Oh, steal nothing I was just typing a lyric from a song for no reason at all.

      • Spongey says:

        Yeah, I agree. I like that picture of them too. :3 Oh, come on… I couldn’t actually kill my Fraser. I loved that sim to bits ❤ I loved Scott a lot too :/ They both died naturally and on their own.

        Normal Crimson is just fine, my insane version of him rotted until he died in prison. ;3

      • Brennon says:

        Well, it’s good you didn’t kill them. My simself is gonna die soon. My wife already died. I don’t want to leave my grandson Jesse though. 😦 It’s gonna be so sad when I pass on. Normal Crimson is still a teen on where I’m at in that legacy.

        yet again I’m hustlin hustlin hustlin (more song lyrics for no reason)

      • Spongey says:

        Yeah, not saying I haven’t killed sims before… just not them. It sure feels weird not having them around, but I guess the herd of children will keep me busy ._.

      • Brennon says:

        Oh yeah, with the twins, there isn’t room for Scott and Fraser anymore is there? Yeah, so get lost Scott and Fraser, you had your turn at living let the babies live!

      • Spongey says:

        Actually I have a mod allowing me to have more than eight sims living in a house, but yeah, it’s easier when people die off xD

      • Brennon says:

        Oh, that’s cool.

  4. daisy. says:

    MINI FRASER 😀 Awwh

    NOOOO Fraser died:( and scott:( Poor Micki, Jed is so strong:D xxx

  5. Rainie92 says:

    I wish I had someone like jed 😦 always there to cheat me up ( ok I was so not thinking just then and put cheating insted of cheering lol) anyway why the cliffhanger 😦 poor noah maybe the cat got out and he was chasing after it and got a bit lost ( my dogs sure love to run off) or he wanted to take the cat for a walk 😀 I’m sure he’ll be ok :S great chapter XD

    • Spongey says:

      LOL no worries! I put crazy stuff in where it doesn’t belong all the time xD I’m the queen of the errors. Yeah, I wish I had a guy like Jedself too. Don’t all girls? :3 Yeah he’ll probably be okay, but this adventure of his… it leads into my story line for him, or the beginning of it anyways 🙂

      Thanks!

  6. Liza says:

    I just read the first words, and NOOO FRASER!

    Off to read, but now sad. 😦

  7. Liza says:

    Jedself is a MIRACLE worker! I LOLed at him picking up Micki though. And oh god Noah, maybe he went to the cat jungle? lol, but only time(and a new chapter) will tell!

    And I’m so glad the babies were okay!

    • Spongey says:

      Yesh he is! 😀 He got Micki through it finally. He had enough of everything she was putting herself through, and the family through. Ha ha, I thought someone might laugh at that ^.^

  8. jaec52609 says:

    YAY i got my twin wish…..i was hopin micki would have twins one of each……awww ana has kittys eyes nd nix has kittys hair…i didnt expect tht 2 happen…aww the kitten was adorable….i hope nothin bad happened 2 noah…..i would be right where jed is (about 2 have a nervous break down) if i came home nd someone tld me my baby was missin…im glad jed finally got micki 2 talk nd changed her around…….im hopin noah is ok

    • Spongey says:

      Ha ha, yes, you did 😉 I know! I was surprised myself with those eyes! I just looked at her like “O_O” The hair wasn’t too surprising, but I still loved that it was pink. The eyes though… just wow. Genetic throwback!

      Exactly! I’d be having a panic attack! I’m sure he’s okay… but wonder why he went out?

      • jaec52609 says:

        well i hope he wasnt kidnapped by ne of our past villians…i sure hope hes ok nd safe…..i hope hes jus out chasin cats (the animals cuz he still little lmao)

      • Spongey says:

        No, I can assure you Noah is not facing any bad guys. You’ll see.

      • jaec52609 says:

        yeah i knew one of mickis babies would get the famous pink hair…didnt expect one 2 inherit the pink eyes….so exciting though cuz EA likes 2 catch u off guard wit surprises like tht…….i always thought it was a mod 2 get different gender babies, but i found out it wasnt when my sim had a boy nd a girl…..i jus havent gotten the 2boys nd a girl triplet i have gotten the 2girls nd a boy…..i guess the 2boys nd girl are very rare on the game…….whelp im rambling lol……great chpt by the way…..theyre always A-MAY-ZING!!! lol

      • Spongey says:

        Yeah, I was hoping one would pop out with pink hair, but eyes?! That was a total surprise! 🙂 Yeah it really does. All the kids this generation turned out so cool looking. Noah is my favorite though, even though Ana is super pretty! :3 I never got a mixed gender triplets before only twins. Sucks cause I always wanted that too. But it’s like I have triplets right now… actaully I have 4 so it’s even worse. God help me XD

        Thanks! :3

      • Brennon says:

        my simself just had triplet grandchildren, two girls and one boy.

  9. Zoe says:

    Great chapter 😀 I think I might have skipped over it but did Fraser died? Yay for Jed to help Micki.

  10. foofu8991 says:

    I love pheonix! he is just soo cute!

  11. wolfmania98 says:

    Its so sad, seeing Micki slipping into depression. She doesnt have the happiest life does she D: . But now, its good to see her smiling. And noah… what are we going to do with you. I bet he ran off after his kitten (which is uber adorable). Oh and the funeral ;( 😥 so sad… where did you get the poses?

    • Spongey says:

      I found the poses on my sims 3 blog. Just google that. Then you go to the side bar, and go down the list until you see custom poses, and it’s right in with that. When I saw them, I was like “PERFECT!!” hahaha.

      Yeah, it was really sad… but her talk with Jed really helped a lot. Not saying Noah running off got her mood in a ‘happy place’. She’s probably scared out of her mind!

      • Tonks says:

        😀 I just found all the poses on that Sims 3 blog! *fist pump*

      • Brennon says:

        The only with Jed holding Noah at first looked a little…weird, like it was meant more for a couple, but now I think it could work for this too. It was Just that Jed’s hand was like really grabbing on his had, and Noah’s hands looked like they were all on Jed’s ears, like “Wanna ear massage daddy?”

      • Spongey says:

        Or it could be him looking his dad square in the face and saying ‘You promise you won’t ever die on me?’ He was just holding onto to him, plus it’s the only pose I have like that… I did my best.

      • Brennon says:

        I know, it’s fine.

  12. Tonks says:

    I know you’ll never get this comment but…
    You amazed me in this chapter. When Jed picked up Micki I started laughing my BUTT OFF! But Noah! What secret is he keeping from us? D:
    And Nix… Reminds me of good ol’ Fraser. 😦

  13. auburn101 says:

    Must be a hectic lifestyle with all those kids! I don’t know how you can manage…
    It’s so sad that they both had to die! It’s creating so much pain to everyone, especially poor Mackenzie. I think what Jed did will help her. I hope so anyway. For her sake, and for the rest of the family’s sake. As for Noah? Where in the world is he… I think he’s hurting just as bad as his mom is…

    Auburn
    great update, can’t wait for the next one.

    • Spongey says:

      Oh, trust me… it is VERY hard. I get so over-whelmed with all those toddlers!!
      Yeah, it’s sad that they both had to die. I thought Fraser would have gone awhile before Scott passed! So sad 😦
      Eh, who knows what Noah is up too 😉

      Thanks!!

  14. Jedidiah says:

    Hehehe, you stole my idea to name my future cat. -.-
    Way to go Jedself! Get that moody wife of yours just out of the house! Gosh, Mikki is getting annoying when she’s in a funk like that. Kind of it’s all about her and everyone has to cater to her. For her sake, grow up, Mikki…. 😛 And I say that with love. Of course, loosing one’s parents’ isn’t the greatest to go through, but she’s acting like it’s the first time in history that ever happened. Like her sisters aren’t in mourning.
    Anyway, I’m so proud of lil Phea. Hehe… she’s got some spunk in her eyes. Wonder where Noah went…or are you tackling the next generational villain already, Spongerita? 😉 Great chapter! And awesome poses between Noah and Jedself, where did you get those if I may ask?
    -Jed, the uber tired, uber worked, and under paid one.

    • Spongey says:

      What?! Stole?! I asked you what to name the cat, and you suggested Snoopy. Your such a dork! =P Ha ha yeah, it was getting a bit annoying… but I think she was only acting that way even more because of the way it happened. She was bed ridden in the hospital, she almost lost her babies, her sisters held the funeral without her, and plus she’s always been so emotional. It was like it all combined together into one nasty blob. She didn’t mean it, it just came out that way. Jedself set her straight though. He did it in the most… ‘loving’ way he could think of XD By force.

      Ha ha yeah, that girl… she’s the little terror. She’s like the leader of follow the leader. “Okay, what I do… you do it worse.” Luke is on her chain XD Does what ever Miss Phea wants.

      Ha ha, not quite 😉 This little stunt Noah is pulling is the beginning of his story line.

      Uhm… oh gosh. I’d have to look for them on my sims 3 blog website. I’ll give you the link once I find them.

      Aw 😦 Poor Jed 😦 *hug hug*

  15. Brennon says:

    Phoenix doesn’t even look like Fraser does he? Besides the hair color.

  16. Deanna says:

    Yay for the an update but boo for dead Fraser and Scott! D=

    Stupid Kaylee and Lia having the funeral without Micki. That’s a big part of letting go is the funeral. =/

    I can’t wait to find out where Noah went. =D

    Update SOON!

    • Spongey says:

      Yeah, no fun losing sims that I get attached too ;_; Fraser died and it made me sad.
      I know, that’s a big reason why Micki was being a b****. She was very angry and frustrated, so she took that out on the people around her.
      Hehehe, you’ll see.

      😀 Will do! I plan on working on another chapter.

  17. elizabeth says:

    Fras and Scott BOTH dead? D:
    But yay for both the babies living! I love their names.
    I can’t believe Lia and Kaylee had the funeral without Micki! What were they thinking???
    LOL, the twins resemble their grandparents and aunts a lot!! Pink haired Phoenix…. 🙂
    OMG OMG OMG WHERE IS NOAH???? Seriously if he gets abducted or something…. D:
    I loved this chapter, I was so relieved to see that the babies and Makenzie made it out alive, but I’m worried about Noah!!!!!!!! Update soon please so I can find out!

    • Spongey says:

      Yeah both of them died. I’d like to think that Fraser was just saying it was his time to go too 😦 I was so sad to see my poor Fraser die. I loved him so much ❤
      Thanks! 🙂 I love their names too, they're so cute. Qiana was the only Q name I could come up with that actually sounded nice. Plus I can just call her Ana. xP
      I don't know 😦 They thought to just get it over with, because they didn't know how long Micki would be in the hospital for. Poor girl, as if she hasn't been through enough.
      Noah… well, you'll see 😉

      I will! I promise! 🙂 I'm also thinking about a 100k views/Christmas special. Since there going to be around the same time, I have to come up with something as a tribute to them both :3 Wracking my brain over herez xP

  18. Michelle says:

    Hi! I dont know how, but I fell off the bandwagon… I just got all caught up though! That was a lot of reading! I started where Scott and Fras got together! haha. I just freaked out cause now I have to wait for the next chapter…. I really hope Noah is ok! EEEPP!!! 🙂
    Michelle

  19. Tonks says:

    I found the funeral poses and downloaded them but they’re not working for me… O_o
    Can you help me please? 😀

  20. Brennon says:

    Hey Sponge do you Fraser for download? If you have anyone else already ready to download then, I might want a few of them too, but I really want Fraser. I want him to be at my simselfs funeral.

  21. Carebear728 says:

    Poor Mickie but I’m happy she snapped out of it. Jed is a godsend

  22. daisy. says:

    Hey, great chapter as always, very sad about fraser, Im guessing he died of broken heart? 😦 and the hair lives on! We have a baby fraser look alike 😀

  23. Liza says:

    Hey Spongezz?

    Would you mind sending me Scott? I want to use him for Roxy, heh heh heh death.

  24. gomar6 says:

    I missed so much! Caught up now .:)

  25. PeytonOnDeck says:

    Not my Fray.NOT.MY.FRAY!!!! SADFACE 😦 R.I.P!
    Aww The Kids are adorable!
    Yay! Jedself cheered EVERYONE up.Weee….
    I’m so hungry right now…Okbainao.

  26. OMFG the toddlers are sooo cute!!! And pink hairr!!!! Thats why i love long family lines (: random babies!! Hahah nicely done chapter ❤ <3<3

  27. Callie says:

    OMFG pink hair. I LOVE IT.
    haha good luck with looking after 4 toddlers! and a runaway child! eep! D: I hope Noah’ll be okay…
    gosh all your sims are so pretty. *dreading heir vote* <33

    • Spongey says:

      I know me too!! I was so happy to see Nix with Pink hair 😀
      Oh dear god… it was so hard. In my game now though, Phea and Luke are kids, and Noah is now a teen. *relief* The twins will be much easier to handle with another pair of hands, and two less toddlers. :3

      N’aww, thank you! 🙂 Wait until you see Noah!! @_@ He’s so hot. <333

  28. monet:) says:

    four toddlers! so cute though:) im glad jed got micki to smile agian but noah ran off somewear! 😦

  29. ddlieber says:

    phoenix has kitty’s hair

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